Comments by The Zebra Warrior
- "tremendous! Exalted poetics, I adored the manner of which ther narration was thread. The best of the current 3 you've posted recently. Great to see your poetry still contains that unique and beguiling surreality that I look for in works of this nature..a superb otherwordly representation; the imagination spinning and seared with the heat of the language and the coldness of the theme...I loved it, it took me where I wanted to be, in the dark hollow crevices of your imagination painted black.....awesome by definition"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Bewildered" by Equinox Asylum
- "I enjoyed this more than the Judgement poem, the inerralations between the rhythmic movements pulsate and throb with intensity and originality; no mean feat where rhyme is concerned; the words poise like Thor's hammer, ready to strike the killer blow, without actual elucidation, so there's a little bit of mystery to it. A brilliant slice of darkness with a pounding pulse. If only more could handle the darkness and give it this form. Excellent poem.."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Venus Sorrow" by Equinox Asylum
- "great to see you post again - you haven't lost that haunted edge, although I will admit at times it felt more like a collection of jumbled thoughts and wasn't always smooth to read. I did however enjoy the unique feel of lines like: "I am the prisoner of space where there is none", gave a very chilling, ghostly feel...an almost hollow; abstract rendering of the narrator's disposition, I felt. I also like the baalnce between imagination, mythical references such as Thor and the introspective stance. It's a shame your poetry is shared so sporadically and you disappear for such lengthy periods...I have the feeling most of your audience that liked sharing in your works has gone, and you might find true interest pretty fleeting. Hope I'm wrong, once again it's a pleasure to trip inside your mind, thanx for sharing big guy :D
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Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Days Pass As Judgement" by Equinox Asylum
- "THIS DOES NOT SUCK!!!! But you misspelt kaleidoscope you nugget! :P Anyhoots...this is a great surreal texture of words that I'm not sure of the whole outcome...would take more time and patience to dissolve"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Hypnotic Barbarism" by Equinox Asylum
- "I missed your words for so long...they remind me of Poe minus the fraught dramatics, the shrieking feel...but they still glide with sadness and sombre brilliance...I'm glad you're still out there...even if now the roles have reversed a little, and I'm not"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Late December" by Equinox Asylum
- "I am speechless....didn't expect to see Baron post tonight, holy shit...not often I'm stunned to near silence, ask this mob...fuckin hell man...you're a star in my eyes, do I fawn too much? Heckers!!!!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Seedling Sour" by Equinox Asylum
- "HOLY FUCK!!!!!! I've missed you immensely buddy....you just made my fuckin nite like I could never describe.....your poems are still as devastating as I last left them.....I'll be damned!!!!!!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Seedling Sour" by Equinox Asylum
- "where are you?!?!?!?! I'm heartbroken yes - truly, you haven't signed in and posted since end of May? You bugger you...I'll find ya...and er, beat you up...I'll even hire Mr.T for help - huh!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mirror Creep" by Equinox Asylum
- "I will hover with you as my halo is floating off and I need to retrieve it for ai am about to sin.Several times in fact.And not always with the same woman!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Hover" by Equinox Asylum
- "I will make love to this poem if thats allowed - on the Pegasus tip of my burning decadent dreams; a place you have allowed my wings to soar...thank you!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "powerful stampede of images in the strange calk of your imagination; invective assault of impenetrable metaphorical intensity.And thats just right."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
