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Tomorrow Started
By Equinox Asylum
Apathy betrays you
Your actions delay you
Regret comsumes all hope in you
You spend the time you borrowed on foolish make believe
You make love with hate
Tomorrow started
All is rape
Tainted blood fills the fire lake
Death has lost it's gravity
This is the day of suffering
Black and blue and shades of gray
Serrated edges carve a comatose haze
Broken souls fly on altered wings
With riot witches over dreadful things
Charming devils sodomize your gash
And you embrace denial, to avoid the victim trial
You need to masturbate
Tomorrow started
All is rape
Troy Allen Bull 10.95
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© 2006 Troy Allen Bull
Published on Wednesday, April 26, 2006.
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Comments on "Tomorrow Started"
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A former member wrote:
what can i say? nothing that can desribe this.beautifully song-like. i want to sing now...-silver
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On Monday, May 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560)
wrote:
This was just really....I don't know how to explain it but it rocked my socks off, with your words that tainted the mind
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A former member wrote:
wild opposition within a consistent and calm rhyme... a frenzy of ideas tearing at each other within a structure undaunted by the fray
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A former member wrote:
your one of the only poets i know that can astound me with rhyme..usually i don't like it, and theres only a few that can keep me interested..but you use a perfect amout of imagery, and none of the rhyme feels forced. your amazing, troy.
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A former member wrote:
different...im still unsure of what it talks about (it doesnt usually hit me right then and there). but i really like it. the style is different. nice write ~~Jessica~~
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On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
wow... this is something new.. something gothic new, but cool... i like it
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On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, Muse
(57) wrote:
i do so love your distorted view. its like gazing at one of those classic lamenting paintings
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A former member wrote:
i love it!
very ironic
nice
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