Venus Sorrow

By Equinox Asylum

Fever valley friction
She dances pink obsession
Rhythm saturation

Open Venus Sorrow
She flushes away tomorrow
Thieves never borrow

Flesh fire addiction
She swallows dirty aggression
Soul evaporation

Venus Sorrow Valley
She rapes it raw with apathy
Fever friction destiny


Troy Allen Bull 5.95

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© 2009 Equinox Asylum
Published on Monday, May 4, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: intoxicating and addictive...the imagery feels like cigarette burns in my brain...I love it!

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