Comments by mywristshurt
- "speechless over here.. and i know that feeling oh too well.. just know you're not the only one who's practically broken their own heart"
Posted by mywristshurt on "One True Love" by Sex Slave
- "again, you have an ending with a meaning.. this was one of those "I will get you back" poems.. so yeah, nice one"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Lost Love" by Sex Slave
- "the ending was very heart clenching.. like, man if only i could've helped her in some way type of poem.. it was really amazing how you could ryhme and tell a story.. i also saw some spelling mistakes.. just to let you know"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Girl" by Sex Slave
- "freaky and yet so remourseful.. very nice to see you try to rhyme, and succeed.. as long as we can understand your feelings, its all good.. very good write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "help me on a title" by Sex Slave
- "... amazing.. i dont think there are any other words to describe it.. you wanted away and always found yourself turning back.. its happening to me to"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Run Away" by Sex Slave
- "i could say the same thing about my mom.. once again, i can relate and this was really good"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Daddy" by Sex Slave
- "being locked up in your own twisted self is hard.. i know, i've been there and i still have trouble with my emotions and being around knives.. i relate, good write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "My World" by Sex Slave
