Comments by Raven
- "I could see someone muttering this over and over again, with their head in their hands, as they rocked back and forth on the sidewalk in the rain. So few pieces have real-life applications like that. Pure excellence, Axeman."
Posted by Raven on "Triolet #1: I Had An Axe" by SilentStalker
- "I can't believe I'm the first person to comment on this. It is, in all respects, positively delicious. The line of thought is one that haunts me often. Lovely work."
Posted by Raven on "Absent\_(ine)" by Future of Despond
- "This is achingly beautiful. .."because I am scared that you do not want me"... made me sigh brokenly. It hit unexpected chords in a masterful way. "
Posted by Raven on "making love [is this it?]" by Lotophagi
- "I echo purr... this is another fabulous work. You'll have to forgive my lack of true commentary, but this has left me quite speechless. I'm off to reread..."
Posted by Raven on "Dreamscape trifecta" by LordBrosnian
- "This was absolutely astounding, both in presentation and vocabulary, as well as the story you spin. I look forward to reading more of your creations "
Posted by Raven on "Sea of tears" by LordBrosnian
- "It's like a list of things viewed through the eyes of the damned... I love how you did this. Have a holly jolly hell, indeed... :)"
Posted by Raven on "’Tis the Season" by Liz
- "Damn. This was just dripping in creative talent; I actually went back to the beginning and read it out loud. (my roommate probably thinks I'm crazy:P ...but in all seriousness, I was quite impressed with message and structure. "
Posted by Raven on "A Dreamer's Wish" by wandering druid
- "This left me feeling oddly defensive... but I suppose in this case, given the poem itself, that's a sign of a job well done. This would make a sweet little song."
Posted by Raven on "You" by Myrrhkuri the fallen one
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