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- "Ah, hatred as a gift. Giving one a reason to turn away from the emotional chains that bind. Hatred does make it easier to leave a former love behind, doesn't it? Partings can't always be amicable. Once again, you quickly bring the point home...Succinct might just be your middle name. Another powerful piece...I am always looking forward to seeing your latest view through the cracks. Brilliant simplicity...I am envious of your ability to pack such a strong feeling in your short ones. ACE, brother!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Ballad For..." by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I play with the cats for hours as well. One of them (almost) enjoys playing fetch. Our time is in a hurry...it is often lost on us...to us. Might as well enjoy it. My cats won't touch milk, but an appropriate title. Always love your snippets of wit. "
Posted by Unknown on "Spilled Milk" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "God does not subtract from the life of a man, the days spent fishing (old Cuban saying). Perhaps something similar afoot here with the kitties? Thank you for this."
Posted by dwells on "Spilled Milk" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "This is exactly how I'm feeling right now.... like Charlie Brown, really. Very nice. It's so impressive that you can convey so much in such a concise amount of words. My teacher always used to scold me for being too wordy and verbose, for fumbling towards purpose and meaning and never quite saying what I wanted to say. He said "true poetry" was clearly cut and didn't overreach itself. It is not a struggle against the words. It is the feeling itself rather than an attempt at painting the scene to evoke said feeling. I don't know that I completely agree, but I respect that gift....and envy it, too."
Posted by Unknown on "Melancholia" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "hopefully you were singing in the rain,
and not in a parade. cause when it rains
on your parade, well that can really
suck ass. i liked it
"
Posted by haunted on "Melancholia" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "The tide comes in and the tide go out.
Gravity - the attractive force exerted between any two bodies; proportional to their mass.
High tide equates to being overweight, and low tide to anorexia, maybe?
Probably too analytical...Liking the end of line textual presentation."
Posted by dwells on "Human Tide (Dead Horse #2)" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "for me, I found this to capture that perspective that only age can bring... through the passage of time, how the world changes, impossibly so in some ways, a perspective that nothing can induce but time itself.... how these words, too, seem to voice so loudly what will one day be silenced. Thank you, very thoughtful and momentous expression of an intangible devolution.... loss."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Nostalgia for the Dead Horse" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "im not even sure what to say to this. it is quite haunting to me. i suppose we will all pass from this world having left things undone and unaccomplished, but you word the incomplete just so. "
Posted by Unknown on "An Unfortunate Author" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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