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"Understood completely Andy, when will they learn? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"awe a master piece haha thanks I'm glad you liked it : ) "
Posted by andhaka on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Such an emotional write very well done this is truly a master piece."
Posted by darkheartmagic on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Thanks dwells : ) And yeah it was while i was writing this piece I first realized that, in fact, the little voice in my head is a "he" I guess it has to do with the fact that my entire life people have told me that they feel bad for my mom for having two girls and no son. I've always tried to be the boy of the family. As i grew up though i realized that there's nothing wrong with being a girl. Religion and culture have set these sexist ideologies upon people, and i guess there was a time that i got caught in their currents. Anywayssss after that long explanation i hope it makes sense why the child in me is a boy... haha"
Posted by andhaka on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Curious that your child is a "He". We all have that small voice of innocence, that grows smaller with the passage of time (but some will never admit to it), well-said Andy!"
Posted by dwells on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"awe thanks for making my day haha. Means a lot coming from the truly amazing PoetessDarkly. You're too sweet. : ) "
Posted by andhaka on "Earth Or Hell" by andhaka

"fuckin' awesome poem lovely lady. Your poetry truly outshines mine. Ya do me proud. :)"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Earth Or Hell" by andhaka

"Thanks I'm glad you liked it :) "
Posted by andhaka on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"wonderful A great poem."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Intoxicating lines all through out. I adored this deeply. Beautiful ending. Btw: Your profile pic is really cool :)"
Posted by River Lily on "For Her " by andhaka

"I'll try my best :) Thanks I'm glad you liked it. "
Posted by andhaka on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Yeah it does, but then I look to those people that I was right about when I gave them another shot....and it makes the misjudgments bearable. "
Posted by andhaka on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Such an emotion filled write. Embrace and protect that child inside you. :)~ I love this;)~ Well done!!"
Posted by blue angel on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"I can't help but wonder if seeing the good in people gets you in as much trouble as it does me.."
Posted by Maladroit on "The Child In Me" by andhaka

"Its the scars that taunt us the most. Thanks dwells im glad you liked it :) "
Posted by andhaka on "Suffocation Blues " by andhaka

"Wounds with eyes, a marvelous visual that still haunts me. Good build-up towards the inevitable perhaps and very well done, cheers Andy!"
Posted by dwells on "Suffocation Blues " by andhaka

"Awe thanks means a lot : ) I`m glad you like it. "
Posted by andhaka on "Suffocation Blues " by andhaka

"This was raw pain on display carried out flawlessly. "They demand for answers I cannot give And for the pain I caused they do not forgive" just 1 of my favorite lines :) I give this 10. Great write hon."
Posted by River Lily on "Suffocation Blues " by andhaka

"hah thanks im glad you liked it : ) "
Posted by andhaka on "The Dark Angel's Song" by andhaka

"nothing wrong with a bit of cannibalism haha, I like how aggressive this is, it made the carnage more convincing "
Posted by Unknown on "The Dark Angel's Song" by andhaka

" I read a short story that had cannibalism involved and thought it's be interesting to write from the perspective of one, that's where all this gore came on from. haha thanks I'm glad you liked it."
Posted by andhaka on "The Dark Angel's Song" by andhaka

"We all have those urges and this was written so very well that I really got caught up in the carnage. Wondering what brought on the bloodlust? Remind me not to drink from that well! Cheers Andy!"
Posted by dwells on "The Dark Angel's Song" by andhaka

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