Comments by All Members
- ""I am shades of gray
White to black"
Great imagery and overall a solid genuine piece!"
Posted by Unknown on "Monochrome." by Dreamless
- "Missed reading you, and love what you consider "emotional shit" this was beautiful, and passionate and agrees with the lovely tattoo goddess "sexy" Happy too see something new from you..hoping theres more to come"
Posted by River Lily on "Inferno." by Dreamless
- "But I'm here now. Looks like you caught me. Memories tend to get stagnant. I don't want to just be a memory."
Posted by Dreamless on "Hieroglyphs." by Dreamless
- "I find your stupid emotional shit (thoughts) to be sexy. Great piece, from open to end... And I particularly loved the final stanza. I love genuine pieces that come from personal experience through life's unfair circumstances. ...exhales the charred ashes... -Smiles&Hugs"
Posted by soul_versing on "Inferno." by Dreamless
- "A vivid and pleasant flashback into the past; only to be reminded, the past is legendary and continually dwells into the present time. Kinda like now, you're nowhere to be found, and I'm left with memories and lasting impressions. .miss your face. --Catch you on the flip-side ... ."
Posted by soul_versing on "Hieroglyphs." by Dreamless
- "in all honesty the way you've laid out the poem adds to the imagery of dwindling downwards, i find it beautiful and unique"
Posted by Unknown on "Scatterbrain." by Dreamless
- ""Open the package, pull out our hearts
Because we're here, holding boxes
Shaking them to hear the rattle" - wonderful visuals! I especially liked the shifting realizations in terms of the potential barrier, as well. Great introspective piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "What's inside?" by Dreamless
- "Striving to prove worth by leaving fragmented pieces of self along the way. Damn this cut deep. Stubbornness being a well deserved specialty. Cheers-"
Posted by soul_versing on "Orchid." by Dreamless
- "Great write, pouring out of an honest place, loved how the words were scattered to mimic the title. Great write."
Posted by River Lily on "Scatterbrain." by Dreamless
- "Wow great poem, I truly feel this. At times in my life things always seem to dwindle downward. I'm glad to see this as a poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Scatterbrain." by Dreamless
- "I'm beyond impressed with your writing. Your mindset is phenomenal too. I say/write this because it's rare that I read a male poet, and he expresses love emotions so elegant the way you did. The attention to detail is what is addicting, and I cannot believe that I haven't decided to read you,, until now. ..shakes head.. and Applauds-"
Posted by soul_versing on "Dollhouse." by Dreamless
- "I'm in love with this... I'm in this situation now, maybe I enjoy the misery. Shame, I know. ...drifts into deep thought letting these words soak in. "
Posted by soul_versing on "Blossoms and lust." by Dreamless
- ""I'll be your nothing, you can be my everything" Felt that line deeply..this image you painted for some reason made me think of the stitched up sally in nightmare before christmas. "sew my soul to yours" another amazing line. Greatly enjoyed this write..its my first time reading you think ill def have to check some more out :)"
Posted by River Lily on "I won't hold my breath." by Dreamless
- "Reminds me of the question Peter Steele asks at the end of "Love You to Death": Hey, am I good enough for you?". I like this poem. 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "What's inside?" by Dreamless
- "The last line truly hit me.... I enjoyed reading this. It sounded like the agonizing writhing in despair of a pre-mourn towards a dying loved one....so disconsolate"
Posted by Unknown on "I won't hold my breath." by Dreamless
- "When I read this, it reminded me of a poetry slam poem - it was pieced together very well. The last line threw me off a bit the first time, but it grew on me the second. A great piece of work!"
Posted by SilentHeart on "I won't hold my breath." by Dreamless
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