Blossoms and lust.

By Dreamless








The way it smells

As you spew your love

Is a familiar fragrance;

Blossoms and lust

Undressing your

Liquor-laced lies

Strangling my senses

Seducing me as you

Devour my soul

Delightful deceit;

I've come for more.







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Copyright 2012 Dreamless
Published on Friday, September 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, soul_versing (883)By person wrote:

    I'm in love with this... I'm in this situation now, maybe I enjoy the misery. Shame, I know. ...drifts into deep thought letting these words soak in. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I read the title on someone's bookmarks and just had to read this! Killer work, this was intense... Scholar

  • matteus On Wednesday, October 3, 2012, matteus (28)By person wrote:

    llove is a hard thing to get over:/

  • A former member wrote: i love your style.. it's so understated and crawls along with a determined intensity and ache... some really lovely word choices here... cheers, love.

  • FadedBlues On Friday, September 14, 2012, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...great title. another moth gets burned by the irresistible flame. can't walk away...

  • A former member wrote: I'm with Dev and Symbol on this those lines are amazing but really the whole piece spoke to my soul! Thank you for sharing nicely penned! Welcome to DP!

  • Devilish On Friday, September 14, 2012, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    WOW.. Hell yeah. perfect title for the perfect words. the last two lines took my breath. I love it. hello there you and welcome to darkpoetry. roam around and read others . bring em back to ya. if you eva need anything i'm a click away. it is obvious your no new writer glad to have you . Scholar

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