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- "You...are so simply straight forward...you make me feel dirty for looking at your note book...you ..just crush...I can't say much more."
Posted by Honey on "write me a love song" by ebonyamore
- "I am really sorry that I don't read like I should...I am more sorry that I have missed you..but...I think I have found an artist worth reading."
Posted by Honey on "shipwrecked" by ebonyamore
- "If sadness...was to be curved on... tear drops,this is your old "eye, tear drop" profile pic...
You can bathe me in a sand blaster...writes like these make me keep coming back."
Posted by Honey on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "If humans were simply flesh, and flesh were simply matter...and matter was simply tangible..tangible would ...simply be a tear...streaking down a dessert of a cheek.
I would catch that tear.Thank you."
Posted by Honey on "Achilles embrace" by ebonyamore
- "It's great to read your words again, mi querida; such regret expressed here... the heel that never heals... the lost warrior who never leaves.... many a forceful image here... how time carries the past into the future, perhaps. *hugs* thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Achilles embrace" by ebonyamore
- "Very powerful and intensive work just exploding with emotional turmoil. I can relate to those 'stygian waters' you describe, and the wish to hold another one through the pain whatever happens. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by tindomerel on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "'build me a cathedral. let your arms be my sanctuary, your eyes my confessional,' ....beautiful write, great images....a great place to be........"
Posted by boneplate on "write me a love song" by ebonyamore
- "a subtle committing thing youve expressed here; a devotion and a love beyond what some can understand.....its a hard and deep thing to love despite all, despite wounds, despite fear.....i try and.... and am scared to death of failing, of being failed........exquisite write full of real emotion. blessings~"
Posted by Unknown on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "awesome write!..u have some emotional turmoil going on there wow!
i feel it...because i live it..and i know every word that was born of ur emotions...is the truth.
a beautiful, emotional piece.
well done.
thanks so much for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "mmmm I like the crashing of the boulder...as if I've felt that sound... years before... felt it bare against my skin... felt it....but never heard a word..... your voice... always a conflagration to be unleashed.... someone who saves so fully, must never know the flames She creates.... heaven.... for you..... surely awaits. *bows before mi amor* hermosissima."
Posted by Unknown on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "I've missed the clarity of your voice, the rich lustrous darkness left in their wake... as always, I am windswept and in awe of the tender manner you breathe life into my veins... and make a numb body feel something so precious and full of life. Thank you. You always paint with you heart's warm blood and the shimmer of your soul... what a beautiful creature you are... it is so apparent. This is quite brilliant."
Posted by Unknown on "All you never needed" by ebonyamore
- "Monumental work... undying intimacy, soft spoken and dreamy, melodiously naked and delving beauty... a real treasure of a piece. Thank you for sharing this."
Posted by Unknown on "write me a love song" by ebonyamore
- "mi querida, esta es hermosa. dos contra el mundo... me gusta tu Latina. The wherefores and when and hows... such mysteries inexplicable... like the love that flows through fantasy.... such purity the world always shuns... could only exist in a song sung in the treasures of you voice. *bows before the altar of mi amore*"
Posted by Unknown on "write me a love song" by ebonyamore
- "how beautiful..i got goosebumps. exquisite, everlasting piece of art. i love the warm feeling i got from reading this, and the images that remained afterwards.
thank you for sharing this timeless piece."
Posted by natalie on "write me a love song" by ebonyamore
- "This reminds me of someone I could have loved, but we had a nice time together. This was a great read, I enjoyed it very much! Thanks so much, Vamp"
Posted by Vampira on "god of thunder" by ebonyamore
- "That was such a great read, it was so beautiful and innocent. I really liked how you were able to paint such a vivid picture with your words. Then the end...it was heartbreaking. I'm so sorry for your pain and loss, thank you for letting us read your experience."
Posted by mindsurfer on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore
- "Sometimes, it seems sullying an amazingly beautiful piece such as this with my humble and unprofessiona comments about the impression it had on me would be a crime. But, I can no longer resist sharing with you the visions these words created in my mind. I couldn't help but recall the novel "Bridge to Tarabithia' by Katherine Paterson and the movie My Girl. This piece definitely is on par with, even better than IMO, both of those emotional works of art as well.
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Posted by Unknown on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore
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