Comments by All Members
- "I agree with Alan. And I like the idea of the mechinations(tears/blood) of sorrow being the remedy. Using math/ accounting terminology to eradicate rage by balance, you captured it beautifully.
I find too much creative punctuation jarring though."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Enemies Unseen" by Loneal
- "i love this. i like the imagery i get and the word choice is impeccable"
Posted by Lucklost on "Un-unique" by Loneal
- "i absolutly love this poem. I have been on both sides. Very interesting. ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "Un-unique" by Loneal
- "I have tasted these flavors and smelled these scents upon awakening many times. Strange how the memories never seem to completely fade from our subconscious no matter how consciously we push them away. Very nicely written. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "First Desire, Last Depart" by Loneal
- "maybe its just me but at times the rhythm was sketchy. the wording was pretty well chosen and i love the title. overall this is darn good."
Posted by Twilight on "Sky Fire" by Loneal
- "I do not believe in ghosts; and that is why they scare me so much. But I do believe in this one, for it is not to say from what it is made. Maybe we need "Gary Jules" here, he would understand. I will simply say that I enjoyed your hounted self- Tiger"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Midnight's Ghost" by Loneal
- "so vivid and beautiful, and yes, great metaphors, I love this, it flowed so nicely *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "Poet Death" by Loneal
- "This pieces is very descriptive, wonderful flow, and gread vocabulary. You write beautifully. I agree with everyone else, I love it."
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "The Dragoness Fall" by Loneal
