Comments by All Members
- "I really enjoyed the concept of this. It's amazing how little of the ocean floor has been explored. I'm sure that over the next few thousand years these things will be found and maybe they'll think that those that came before them were curious explorers. Interesting read!"
Posted by Dilated View on "Broken Upon the Shore" by RedWolf
- "I feel this is a very common situation. The empathetic endlessly building up others but people in general are selfish and do not even recognize the effort put into lifting them up. Very real write"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Why does no one reach out to me?" by RedWolf
- "I feel that your last stanza doesn't give itself enough credit. These may be marks on a page but, as you say, they are a personalized release from our cages. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Marks on a Page" by RedWolf
- "And yet those same marks ensnare moments and feelings in time, posing them in prison portraits on display. The paper is the lock, the pen the key, poetry is power over our circumstances, and I for one enjoyed your "marks". Write on, and welcome to The Valley."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Marks on a Page" by RedWolf
- "I'm reaching out to u right now sweetheart. I don't know u but I feel your pain and can relate to what you're going through. Pm me if u ever wanna chat. I care, I'm a stranger but I truly care."
Posted by Unknown on "Why does no one reach out to me?" by RedWolf
- "May you find the friend or lover that you seek; whatever the case might be. Sounds to me like you are a giver for all the takers to abuse. Make some time for yourself RW and welcome to DP. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Why does no one reach out to me?" by RedWolf
- "felt like i was talking to myself, thankyou for the tears. Its so comforting at 3AM when sleep sneaks out from your eyes. "
Posted by Unknown on "Do you see me?" by RedWolf
- "Holy smokes! So much descriptive language for feelings and sensations. Great read. I connected with this physically, feeling anxious but in a good way, which is a great feat for written word. Thanks!"
Posted by From_Ashes on "Sexual Tension" by RedWolf
- "Wow, the flow was astounding. Not to mention the sentiment. It is oh too relate-able for me. There's a sense of existential crisis, solitude, but also hope and longing all in one piece. I love it. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by From_Ashes on "Do you see me?" by RedWolf
- "Does anyone look at each other the same way. We liked the flow of this piece. Please continue "
Posted by I IS ME on "Do you see me?" by RedWolf
- "This felt like a stream of consciousness. It all seemed to flow. Welcome to DP. "
Posted by Drea on "Do you see me?" by RedWolf
