Comments by All Members
- "i am awestruck. i think i opened my mouth in awe at the second stanza.. and closed it at the last.. tears and all. you are amazing. i cant tell you how much i adore the descriptions of oneness with the earth.. magical, ever so magical."
Posted by Daemonicus on "sacred sexuality (lust of the earth)" by KittyStryker
- "whoa. damn. wow. slow down, that was trippy fast. but wow... "one night stands/are delicious/when you don't trip/over what someone will think". Very nicely put, this expresses my views in a way I couldnt have possibly put it. Thank you.
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Posted by Skye on "sex as a modern form of barter?" by KittyStryker
- "ive felt this before. wonderfully expressed bast, and as imperfect as we are, that's what makes us more beautiful because we are different. "
Posted by Skye on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "the last stanza carcked me up! Your philosophy rings so true... should you choose to give yourself to one and one only that is fine and wonderful, but why should one who chooses to share the love be condemned? Great write. Fox"
Posted by flying_fox on "sex as a modern form of barter?" by KittyStryker
- " it is our imperfections that will grant us the privilage of being loved as a whole person. though you my dear have no such imperfections, only self doubt, and that can be remedided...-Dark"
Posted by Reverend Machine on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "Love will conceal all imperfections, untill you slowly are given a sight to who a person is, then imperfections and all we are judged and our loved ones will love us or choose another,"
Posted by Reverend Machine on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "Heavy is your soul with the burden to which it has been set, but frailty is much more a sufferage, be well Bast, may life grant you a small reprieve. Excellent write...-Dark"
Posted by Reverend Machine on "a///void" by KittyStryker
- "no katy dear, lets not be a liar. uve turned more heads that i can count. sure, sometimes they were weirdos in baby blue faerie shirts that scared two grown up girls but not the flaming guy boy. ahh...we rule."
Posted by XCryingMinotaurX on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "Great piece as usual - I like the lines "love offers a way
of concealing bodily imperfections
sunburns don't show
when you have rose tinted
shades", "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "This stirred up feelings that shouldn't be combined :) Love it, I'm adding this to my favorites *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "Amazing work! We don't have the discriminating 'perfect' features such as the ones you speak of, It's who we are that makes us, not what we look like and that should be accepted. Awesome point make here, brilliant. ~L "
Posted by Lynaes on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "Truth, kitty, shouldn't be a hard thing to swallow. When one speaks of there own inperfections in such an eloquent way... it makes the acceptence of lackings much easier to injest. I love the way this poem flows. The ending is madness & i love it."
Posted by Drifter on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "The lines "i am not
your ideal-
and it's something
that i'm sorry about" just broke my heart. Don't ever feel sorry for being who you are. I do know what you mean here tho and I too have felt it before. It's horrible. And you're perfect. Fox
"
Posted by flying_fox on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "I swear Kitty, you and I have the same mind sometimes. "i am not your ideal-and it's something that i'm sorry about" that's something I've been saying way too much myself lately. Awesome awesome write."
Posted by Invader Lyn on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- ""i celebrate emptiness with the taste of never was and vodka bitter on my lips" how many of us have been so heartbroken to do this before, I know I have. This piece is so sad but it's so beautiful too, I can relate to every line. Good write."
Posted by Invader Lyn on "don't touch that dial" by KittyStryker
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