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- "The itsy-bitsy spider went up the water spout...but I digress JR. This was a simile I believe, to an addictive craving that needs to be scratched or smooshed perhaps. Very creative imagery and hoping it's not the same brown recluse that got me (seriously) Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson
- "K... Hey sTr8, we have to go the store today; don't forget milk, eggs, potatoes & dog fud (that's how dogs spell it.) There, left myself a message. On a serious note, this is probably my favorite piece of yours so far brother. Idk why the spiders image is so awesome in my head from this: runic glowing tattoo-like tribal lines going up it's legs & joining on the body. That's what I get from this, thanks my man. Loved theis poem, keep it up. "
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson
- "Wow, this was very different from what I've read up to now (but in a good way) and it felt as intricate as threads of a cobweb, creating a beautifully crafted bond in the process. Very well done! "
Posted by Samael Crowe on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson
- "I like "It's night for good" ... we've come to expect three lives to everything. Finality has lost it's grip. Nice write, I enjoyed it."
Posted by bpathos on "Where are we?" by Jonas Robinson
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