Comments by All Members
- "This painted a picture of a shivering girl standing on the street as all the hurried business types ignore her pass her by... 'Just a decoy' ... simple and cutting words that make the impact that is this work. Well done."
Posted by Raven on "She Never Wanted [It] To Be That Way" by October Death
- "...damnit... I hate that. its a great write, a sad and truthful topic. *sighs and gets out her lil black book and starts thumbing threw it pages*"
Posted by Dei on "And We Were One No More" by October Death
- "Sara! I just went through all your poems. And they. Are. Really good. You're an awesome writer, you have real talent and I'm glad you're putting it to use in something you love."
Posted by October Death on "The Other Lover" by October Death
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