Comments by All Members
- "Life can truly becom a curse and what relief some have found in those crimson drops. The rhyme sceme dose not stick out but makes it flow better. Very well done. "
Posted by Unknown on "Keep Breathing" by stumbleine queen
- "fuckin hell, the truth that rings through these words is deafening.the raw emotion here is paralyzing, the imagery is blinging...all in all this piece has crippled me and left me disabled...very well done"
Posted by Unknown on "Keep Breathing" by stumbleine queen
- ""All time does is make things worse,
'til life itself becomes a curse." thats my favorte line. I'm going to favorite this one, short, true and honest."
Posted by Unknown on "Keep Breathing" by stumbleine queen
- "I love this one. Gorgeous flow, as well as a sadly common portrayal of emotions. Buetiful write, I'm bookmarking."
Posted by Unknown on "Pretty" by stumbleine queen
- ""i'm in love with misery/my sorrow" exquisite take on the concept of being addicted to pain."
Posted by MESUN on "Irony" by stumbleine queen
- "i dont know what to say to this one... hmmmm i like the theme of it the flow...
awe hell its pretty good"
Posted by Unknown on "Pretty" by stumbleine queen
- "i think im going to crawl into a corner and cry now. but it was well written, and it depressed me so you did well. "
Posted by Dei on "Sad Eyes" by stumbleine queen