just a girl

By stumbleine queen

I'm just a girl,
small and plain.
I watch the blood
flow down the drain.
It's not my fault,
the world's insane.
The scars all fade,
but the pain remains.

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Copyright 2004 Michelle Higgins
Published on Friday, December 31, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BeautifulCalamity On Saturday, January 1, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    yes. . raw imagery makes this all the more powerful, i agree with anidayz. . i think you stated this in an effective way. nicely done.

  • AniDayz On Friday, December 31, 2004, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    true,,,the worlds fucked up...and the pain remains. nicelyput. very raw imagery.

  • Dei On Friday, December 31, 2004, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    *nods head in approval* well done

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