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- "normally I'm not a huge fan of the standard A-B-A rhyme scheme but it works wonderfully here- the attempt to rationalize the chaos of nonrational emotion. Good write"
Posted by ShadowFlight on "GlaZed!" by Black_Cherry_Doll_
- "sometimes people need to hurt, cry, and let out their pain, otherwise it grows stale and stagnant and makes them sick. i love the repititiousness in this poem...it gets the main subject of the write across. once again, exceptional work. -zay"
Posted by Unknown on "Sometimes...." by Black_Cherry_Doll_
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