Good thing it doesn't show

By Black_Cherry_Doll_

I hate you so much
Because I don't hate you
At all.

I hate that every morning
I wake up you're on my mind
And I know I'm not on yours.

I hate the fact that you
Never call
And that you treat me like I
Am nothing to you.
Am I?

I hate the fact that I'm
Always last
Or never there at all.

I hate that everytime I
See you, you only appear more
Gorgeous and again I start to fall.

And I won't do this
Anymore. I need to let
It go.

This pain inside is killing me
Good thing it doesn't show!!

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Copyright 2004 Black_Cherry_Doll_
Published on Wednesday, December 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • peril_notion On Friday, June 3, 2005, peril_notion (88)By person wrote:

    "I hate that every morning I wake up you're on my mind And I know I'm not on yours." I absolutley love that line. A piece of work that I can wholeheartedly relate to. Nice work. ~Heather

  • A former member wrote: yes it is...i am thankful for that...excellent work!

  • VenomPlease On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    Excellent. And an awesome last line as I'm sure you intended

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