Just a moment

By Black_Cherry_Doll_

I know you got caught up
In the moment and I guess I did too.
But the moment is over
And I can't do this.
It was great while
We were there
And if we could live
In that moment
I would stay with you forever.

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Copyright 2004 Black_Cherry_Doll_
Published on Wednesday, December 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    sometimes a moment is all we have but those moments lend us memories for a life time...stunning ~kristy

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, December 9, 2004, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    everyone should be able to relate to this...good work

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    ty so much---steph

  • A former member wrote: awe that was beautiful i loved it nice write.

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