Comments by All Members
- "wow.. you got some heartbreak going on and its good to let all of it out by just simply writing.. i love your work, so this just adds on to why i read more of your stuff"
Posted by mywristshurt on "What It Is To Cry" by GothicBlack
- "wow... this was a beautiful poem.. indeed it reminds me of some of my works, but you also have your own style and tasted.. i love you work"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- ""My veins are all on fire".. That line is just awesome and speaks so clearly of your thoughts being invaded by sadness. This is really sad, but honest and well written. *bravo* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "My Mind’s At Fault" by GothicBlack
- "That captured something I feel and deal with far too often...that internal struggle to topple the darker half that shades who we want to be. As always, brilliantly poignant and sad."
Posted by Unknown on "My Mind’s At Fault" by GothicBlack
- "You do an excellent job of describing this feeling. I have felt this way before, and this brings it all back in vivid detail. Amazing poetress ;). ~ Asheai"
Posted by Kali Ma on "Too Weary To Live Life" by GothicBlack
- "oh man how I feel this! Even though its better not to cut you miss the pretty scars and the fresh agony this is beautifully written"
Posted by weyvern on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "oh wow i realy enjoyed this it's loveley. the feeling of being outside on's self is such a preciouse thing"
Posted by weyvern on "Storm Clouds" by GothicBlack
- "This.. transformed before my eyes.. much like a brewing storm.. the end felt not of closure, but of release, but not exactly of satisfaction or relief.. Well observed and perfectly melancholy. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Storm Clouds" by GothicBlack
- "What a veritable flood of emotions and imagery. While reading this, I almost felt as though I were sitting next to you under the storming sky. Gorgeous write, my dear."
Posted by Raven on "Storm Clouds" by GothicBlack
- ""I swallow the blood of my own fear
And I walk through the ashes of my own tears"
intense line....very deep.....your a great writer..i loved this write...good job"
Posted by Lucklost on "Swallow Hard" by GothicBlack
- "the notion of bleeding fear...the solitude, lack of illumination and self fear: "I'm frozen here In terrified fear Of myself" related to the loss of life itself, bleeding...is very powerful"
Posted by Unknown on "Swallow Hard" by GothicBlack
- "of what has become your life. Yet it also shows this unbearable nature. Two sides of the same coin flipped up in the air, speaking a different story as it faces you. Interesting, I like it.
Doc"
Posted by Doc on "Swallow Hard" by GothicBlack
- "I do love the entrace. Its hard for me to look at this from simply one angle. "And yet i cant but enjoy myself
In this world Of bliss with an absence of life " - this makes me think of a simple acceptance, although allowing for consitance question, of t"
Posted by Doc on "Swallow Hard" by GothicBlack
- "you probably changed yourself. it's so sad, the way things really work...i know, that's what happened for me, at least...i fell so far...but i was a well lighted decent, i thought destruction would make me beautiful...
~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "I wish I could be thankful for pure apathy...I soooo long for numbness; I guess I just need more pain. Thanks for the hope, thank you"
Posted by Unknown on "To Comprehend Pain" by GothicBlack
- "I love how its thanking people for something like pain. Yes, it does seem like all people do is hurt eachother, but look at the other side. I know without my friends, I'd be dead. I like the view of this piece. Very powerful.
Kitty"
Posted by Kitty_LostInHerOwnMind on "To Comprehend Pain" by GothicBlack
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