Comments by All Members
- "thought provoking, but to be truly on the outside, you must be just as on the inside, society is addicted to the outer ware, of our skin, but on rare occasions can beauty be found without superficial marks, without the fake, without the make-up. society i"
Posted by beautifulfallenangel on "Beautiful?" by call to arms
- "This is amazing, absolutely incredible... This was deep and touching, beautiful. It really made me think, because that was almost me when I was 14. This could have been anyone, really. It's so sad that's true. Keep writing, I want to hear more."
Posted by Unknown on "Fourteen Years (and not another more)" by call to arms
- ""I once (or maybe twice) said/I wouldn't trade this for the world" This breathes like a breeze upon skin, so gentlye, so soft-spoken. Excellent job. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Love Song" by call to arms
- "I think the last phrase is to direct. Great poem but kinda kills it in the end. poetry is the economy of words. I would of liked something that says what the last line says without saying it. to make the reader ponder what u really ment then telling us di"
Posted by Unknown on "Becoming Changeless" by call to arms
- "just thought i would let you know that when i was in high school, all the pretty girls did have herpes, 75% of my graduating class had herpes, all the preps... luckly, i was a loser in high school"
Posted by Jenni on "Beautiful?" by call to arms
- "America also has the highest percentage of mental disease. Every teenage girl has felt it...there's an overwhelming pressure in this country to "fit the mold""
Posted by call to arms on "Beautiful?" by call to arms
- "American culture...?...the cat walk was born in Paris, along with fashion. Most news papers around the world claim Americans are the fattest people in the world. i'll have to come back to this."
Posted by elisa on "Beautiful?" by call to arms
- "I FUCKING HATE THIS PIECE, YET LOVE IT. I was told the first few words of this not even two minutes ago. ""Sits and Thinks"" MAYBE JUST MAYBE"
Posted by Unknown on "Point.Blank." by call to arms
- "You kind of broke down and let the best of you go towards the end didnt you bud. But I did like. I hate everything about today, and yesterday, and every day for the past two years"
Posted by Unknown on "Love Song" by call to arms
- "...simple stuff like this just makes me smile...but I think it's the actual message that I like best...if I end up thinking some other crazy shit up, I'm blaming you for the idea... "
Posted by SilentStalker on "Point.Blank." by call to arms
- "desperation and loss, giving in..the actual thought or statement of eating razorblades I've felt and heard...actualized in a poem. You really captured it."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Realized Entity" by call to arms
- "I like this one and actually I tell everyone its a guy I hate but.. I gess time will tell when I tell what my name means. lol this poem is fantastic. I am a big fan of the short and sweet "
Posted by Unknown on "Empty Miles" by call to arms
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