Empty Miles

By call to arms

I'm lost
With Broken Fingers.

Betrayed,
By shards of metal
Down the drain.

Completely
Beside myself
Addicted to addiction.

Obsessed
With needing
Determined.

Unaware
Of all things.
Everything.

Lost
I'm always
Searching.

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Copyright 2004 mismatchedhearts
Published on Tuesday, November 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I feel you. I like your style.

  • A former member wrote: I like this one and actually I tell everyone its a guy I hate but.. I gess time will tell when I tell what my name means. lol this poem is fantastic. I am a big fan of the short and sweet

  • A former member wrote: Short but good

  • A former member wrote: "Completely Beside myself Addicted to addiction. " i really like the way this poem flows. great job.

  • Lotophagi On Sunday, November 21, 2004, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    awesome rhythm happening here, and yes, "Addicted to addiction." unreal line..... very cool piece indeed. Nice Write.

  • A former member wrote: addicted to addiction... really makes you think doesn't it

  • whisperer On Monday, November 15, 2004, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    hmmmm....few words could be saying many things...or just one...lovely...-]darkness[-

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