The Molested Whispers Of Shadows

By Stormcomin

Mine is the fury of repression
Remembrance devoured by innocence and lies
And dreams providing accession
Mutilated mem'ries I blindly apprise

Mine is the torment of survival
Anamnesis unwanted, unloved and unfair
Where pain's a frequent arrival
Calibrated churnings of sickly despair

Mine are the nightmares of premature gallows,
Of meadows and rainbows and willows in hell
Mine are the molested whispers of shadows,
Inciting a silent, but imminent farewell

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Copyright 2004 Stormcomin
Published on Thursday, November 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Friday, September 9, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    I agree! Definetly worth the title it carries. I don't wanna repeat everything Dybbuk just said, so i'll just say....Brava!

  • alesana On Friday, September 9, 2011, alesana (41)By person wrote:

    okay normally I don't bother with the poem of the day but this is excellent... way to make me feel like a crappy writer :P

  • AniDayz On Thursday, February 24, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    'of meadows and rainbows and willows in hell...', 'mine is the torment of survival...'....amazing lines...this is intense and wonderfully done*

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, January 23, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    Wow....this is just amazing! keep up the good works!

  • A former member wrote: Fuck!!!Stunning..dazzling...i cant guote any line because all the lines are marvelous....Thank u alot..Imad

  • A former member wrote: my eyes brimmed as i read this...this writing entails the very soul of morbid in and of itself...absolutely thought provoking-lindsay

  • A former member wrote: I know this to well,to few can relate to this part of hell-pistol

  • Solace On Monday, November 15, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Compromise nothing to anyone, if there is a meaning that they do not understand, they should search for its meanings and maybe in searching they will come to learn something about life, a lesson... *smiles* I love this

  • Zhee On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was a wonderfully executed piece of work!

  • stuart_pid On Friday, November 12, 2004, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    well composed and wonderfully written. also, an expansive vocabulary is never a bad thing in poetry. thats why dp has a dictonary built in. another excellent piece.

  • ShadowFlight On Thursday, November 11, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    wow... everything about this... the rhyme, cadence, subject... fine fine work!

  • call to arms On Thursday, November 11, 2004, call to arms (31)By person wrote:

    this piece is nothing short of amazing. you're writing style is remarkable. :)

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