Comments by All Members
- "This is wonderful! I love the image that this creates in the mind.... it really speaks to my imagination. I really like the line that reads, in part, "A wracking so sullen..."! Excellent word crafting. :)"
Posted by bluegypsea on "The Sound of Swarms" by Brandon
- "Sounding like you need a night out maybe Brandon. The lure of the RPG has gotcha by the sound of it maybe. Come back to us and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Coma" by Brandon
- "Good structure and flow, and I particularly like that you left plenty of room for interpretation. I like your ending notation as well and it made me smile. I've always had fun when writing all my pieces. --Write on"
Posted by soul_versing on "Gin and Catatonic" by Brandon
- "A devastatingly sad and remorseful poem about the guilty consciences that some of us still have Brandon. Your surprise ending caught the reader completely by surprise with the highly impactful message. Perhaps this is our Hell on Earth for the penitence we can offer without absolution - bummer, and cheers! - Dan (dwelling doesn't help) "
Posted by dwells on "To Delve and Dismiss" by Brandon
- "I should site Bloodborne, for inspiring about 60% of this piece, as well as a symbolic transformation of man to monster, as seen in the public eye after committing a heinous crime."
Posted by Brandon on "Procuring a Revelation" by Brandon
- "From a werewolf, to Jack the Ripper eh Brandon? Liking the way you shifted gears here on the reader. Cheers and welcome to DP! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Procuring a Revelation" by Brandon
