Comments by All Members
- ""Endlessly searching
for more than enough" - i love this couplet especially. It's been said already but i'll still join the crowd: great metre, damn fine flow. enjoyed this ride all the way. great write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "desire" by stuart_pid
- "this does have an excellent flow...are we ever really satisfied? most of the time i don't think we are... "
Posted by girlafraid on "desire" by stuart_pid
- "i absolutely loved the ending... wonderful work!!!parts of it reminded me something i wrote ,"do the tears move you, of all those you deprive, running with all the dead- are you still alive?" ..~zhee"
Posted by Zhee on "desire" by stuart_pid
- "Perfectly worded, flowed so well and great rhyming. As for the content, very powerful feelings.. Wow, this is good. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "desire" by stuart_pid
- ""When the you that you knew
becomes drastically changed
and desire for freedom
is all that remains." fuck yeah, great finish to a well done write. cool man."
Posted by Unknown on "desire" by stuart_pid
- "The picture is cool. The Work is AMAZING. I so loved this one. Everything about it is awesome. The sadness, the mournfulness, the sorrow, exquisite beauty. -michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "~Leah's Song of Death~" by stuart_pid
- "I like the art. I don't care for the poem. That's rude of me to say, since I didn't even read the poem. But who cares I like the art. Bleh."
Posted by Unknown on "~Leah's Song of Death~" by stuart_pid
- "cold resignation from longterm disappointment...cutting souldeep through this piece; great metre and very well written throughout. very effective piece."
Posted by purr_verse on "Slow Deconstruction" by stuart_pid
- "disappointment and struggle through the lifespan...what a sad piece, how terrible it is that alot of people live like this...very well written..."
Posted by girlafraid on "Slow Deconstruction" by stuart_pid
- "this was so painfully sad.. i loved the flow .. but above all, i could feel the struggle and anguish! beautiful work!"
Posted by Zhee on "Slow Deconstruction" by stuart_pid
- "The rhyme scheme is awesome, and the use of words is awesome. The message...know that is totally true. Its sad that society spends its time killing all of male emotions."
Posted by BleedSilver on "Slow Deconstruction" by stuart_pid
- "this was really wonderful.. i agree would make an awesome song.. has perfect flow..."
Posted by Zhee on "dysphoria" by stuart_pid
- "this would make an excellent song. complete and compelling rhythm, with a flawless pace that drags the reader through; great write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "dysphoria" by stuart_pid
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