Comments by All Members
- "heh heh heh, crazy write, I love the attitude - and the short, effective jabbing lines perfectly emphasise the 'nature' of the punk girl..... Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Pretty Little Punk Girl" by stuart_pid
- "oh god! this reminds me of some poeple i know, and u know what?! it's so true! if people would just come back down to Earth, finish up being "the shit," and stop being so full of themselves, it would make them so much happier, and conseqently it would mak"
Posted by Unknown on "Pretty Little Punk Girl" by stuart_pid
- "sweet....I could not agree more, I wish people would stop being so uptight and get over themselves.....of course then they would have to be happy and who wants that"
Posted by Unknown on "Pretty Little Punk Girl" by stuart_pid
- "I read this poem a long time ago, and I have thought about it several times since I have been back, but I didn't know the name. I am so glad that you posted it. It's just as wonderful as I remember.. "
Posted by Savannah on "The Box" by stuart_pid
- "Very cool, the picture or the poem would have been great on their own but together this was a perfect mix. Very nicely done. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "[barely there]" by stuart_pid
- "I agree, your rhyme schemes are very flavorful and smooth, the flow in this was great. You seem to finish your works very powerfully and this one was no exception. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "No Title" by stuart_pid
- "This was very fresh and original. I liked the way the rhyme scheme changed toward the middle and then slowed for the last two lines, gave it a very heart racing feel. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Box" by stuart_pid
- "Wow the format in this was great. I really, really like the last two lines and especially the very last line. Excellent work. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "from nobody to nobody" by stuart_pid
- "the concept behind this is just unreal, I love it.... and your constuction of the piece is masterful and complete.... you've filled what you seemed to have set out to achieve in this, without leaving any gaps which is rarely accomplished (in my view). Tha"
Posted by Lotophagi on "The Box" by stuart_pid
- "Unusual . . the title dragged me in and the poem did not fail me . . original and strangely beautiful. A wonderful, wonderful write ~ Rose"
Posted by Unknown on "from nobody to nobody" by stuart_pid
- "This is quite possibly the greatest contribution to litterature I have ever read. Congradulations, you've impressed me."
Posted by Unknown on "The Box" by stuart_pid
- "This is awesome, I love the rhythm and the power in it, it reads like a frantic list in my mind, angry and demanding, but at the same time almost seeking and begging..... excellent write. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Fuck you. (an ode to love)" by stuart_pid
- ""Beneath her bridled misery, behind her silent cries, you'll find her fragile soul and there is where her beauty lies" ~ your words are eloquent, graceful and utterly captivating, laden with an enchanting and alluring mist and I can only reach the other s"
Posted by Unknown on "Her Beauty" by stuart_pid
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