Comments by All Members
- "I wouldn't have tipped him Mo if it was a funeral dirge. Interesting turn of phrases along the way. Some demons just won't listen. Cheers for something differently original my friend - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Casa de lobos" by molock
- "I know this all too well. Always hard to escape those demons and you described that perfectly. Well done Mo."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Casa de lobos" by molock
- "thanks Dan, although this wasn't written about anyone I knew personally but many I knew of. I quit school when I was 14 and left home, so I ended up in an environment filled with drugs and death. I felt like was going to be a victim so I took off and hitchhiked up and down the east coast ( USA ). for the most part when I write I draw from those experiences at that time in my life. Cheers my brother - mo"
Posted by molock on "silver spoon roses and whiskey" by molock
- "You have drawn an indelible image on the canvas of life here with your words Mo. I'm certain it was a difficult write and too real to be a fantasy, sadly. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "silver spoon roses and whiskey" by molock
- "Thanks man, i agree it's a little shorter than i would normally write.
It's about a former dark poetry member we had some things in common i really liked her. Peace - mo"
Posted by molock on "gypsy" by molock
- "what a coincidence, I stole this from the piano man at the local pub. Kinkifrog it's an honor to have you drop by, I look forward to your work and your comments, thank you ....Cheers my dear - Mo"
Posted by molock on "silver spoon roses and whiskey" by molock
- "thanks KB, music is one of my favorite things in the world it's why I started writing. peace man- mo"
Posted by molock on "gypsy" by molock
- "thanks for reading. I read some of your work, it's really good I look forward to reading more from ya. peace. mo"
Posted by molock on "lord have mercy" by molock
- "thanks Damien. this one was a labor of love, I was up until 5 a.m. writing it. i'm pretty happy with it. as always thanks for your support. later bro - mo"
Posted by molock on "lord have mercy" by molock
- "thanks for the typo alert. your double ought comment made me giggle, I literally had just got home from Wal - Mart when I read your comment. didn't get any shells though. lol, peace - Mo"
Posted by molock on "lord have mercy" by molock
- "Hi Mo - penultimate stanza; penultimate line - guessing "it" might be an extra word typo maybe?
Betrayal is the worst, and some wounds will never heal.
Some people are never meant for the long haul. Cheers amigo, and don't forget to add more double ought to your Wal-Mart shopping list! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "lord have mercy" by molock
- "You are on fire Mo! This one I can actually see the video. It could be country rock like Skynyrd. Keep it up brother. Peace"
Posted by Damien on "lord have mercy" by molock
- "Again man you write stuff that I feel like I could sing along too. This had a great flow to it. Another good one."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "gypsy" by molock
- "Do they still call those titty bars "gentlemen's clubs I wonder Mo?
I can still recall Big Red from time to time...unrequited love, or something :)
Cheers my friend - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "gypsy" by molock
- "thanks this is something I wrote a while ago I don't think I was finished with it though. happy new year"
Posted by molock on "the gray" by molock
- "thank you so much Damien. I wish you guys the best as well.
I've been blessed this last year,
can't wait to read yours and Nadia's work this year. I know it sounds weird when I say this, but it comes from the heart when I say I love you guys. talk to ya later my brother. - mo p.s. say hi and wish Nadia a happy new year for me. peace"
Posted by molock on "the gray" by molock
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