Comments by All Members
- "This made me smile. It's so sweet and the flow was very well done. So lovely. "
Posted by Drea on "why me?" by molock
- "You're a sweetheart Amaryllis, thank you so much for the positive vibe. Later my dear - mo"
Posted by molock on "why me?" by molock
- "Aside from how lovely this piece is and how perfect the flow and sentiment are, I would respond with, Why not you?"
Posted by Amaryllis on "why me?" by molock
- "Amen brother, nothin' like home for some soul searchin'.
I keep hearing about this McShane fella from various places, almost like the collective conscience wants me to check it out, so now it's on my list of things to do. I agree we can't really ever go home, it's some where in the past. peace my brother. - mo"
Posted by molock on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
- "you know K.B. I would love to hang out around a camp fire with you and some other dp members I think that would be so badass maybe someday my brother. I haven't been on dp a lot lately so I have to get caught up on my reading, I look forward to checking your page for stuff I missed. be well bro, peace - mo"
Posted by molock on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
- "I could hear this one as a song , with the rhythm of a slow train for a beat , heading for some southern comfort and a place to rest your weary feet ... good one :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
- "Another amazing write mo. I can picture sitting around a camp fire with an old acoustic guitar hearing this sung. This took me to another place, well written bud."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
- "I cannot fathom why this doesn't have more comments...the perfect flow, the spiritual feel, the southern way. This rolled like waves on the bayou for me. Places can become cages, I think all of them do, but all you have to do is step away for moment and coming home becomes pure again. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
- "Gimme some of that old time religion; praise the Lord and pass the bottle Mo! Would that we could go home again...
Sean McShane rode his 3-legged horse named Tripod, into town backwards; just to see where he had been! Kind of reminds me of that poem of his (can't recall the title). Strum that guitar and fire up the Barbie. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
- "And here I thought I'd pick up a few pointers on the fairer sex Mo :) Hoping this finds you well my friend. Much enjoyed the extended metaphor - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "White girl seduction" by molock
- "We move on a find another more worthy of our attentions Mo. Only then can we look back in recollection; with less pain and loss. Until then...Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Cumbersome disguise" by molock
- "You always have that song vibe going man. I always end up hearing a song in my head. Like it."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Splinter" by molock
- "Thanks for reading, this poem isn't about a person its intended to be a warning to anyone thinking about trying cocaine. As for American dad, i'm sorry, i've never seen it. i have no frame of reference. Peace Noel - mo"
Posted by molock on "White girl seduction" by molock
- "thanks KB this is one of the first things I ever wrote. my style has changed some since then but it's fun to go back and take a look. talk to ya later man - mo"
Posted by molock on "Ax to grind extended version" by molock
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