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- "that is a scary thought my friend. I've been looking in to revelations a lot lately I feel like things are about to go down. peace my brother"
Posted by molock on "stars fell like rain" by molock
- "Liked the repeating line very much here Mo, but then that's just my proclivity for all things apocalyptic I'd suppose. Wondering what we'd do to each other if for real??? Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "stars fell like rain" by molock
- "When you dance with the devil you wait for the song to stop. This was delightfully evil mo, you just get better and better. Almost feels like a Danzig type song, loving it. Keep them coming bro "
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Babylon sister" by molock
- "Several "sisters" come to mind Mo, but your accompanying photo eliminates most of them my friend. Oh for those hanging gardens; with the Euphrates in spring flood. I can still hear them ululating in that fiery furnace. She looks like a keeper to me. Enjoy and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Babylon sister" by molock
- "Love the long bowel sounds, and the ache and oh so alone feeling that emerges. Impactful imagery - I see utter darkness in a starless sky. Great write! Thank you for your work!!"
Posted by Sidanne on "stars fell like rain" by molock
- "This is golden and timeless, such impactful and lilting words flowing perfectly and adaptive to the reader. This touched me."
Posted by Amaryllis on "stars fell like rain" by molock
- "Great lyrics though such a sad song ... that title and refrain conjures such a sinking feeling and loss of hope , yet in a visually stunning way... is there a melody?"
Posted by kinkifrog on "stars fell like rain" by molock
- "yeah I wrote this one a while back, you hit it on the head my version of heavy metal lyrics"
Posted by molock on "sabotage" by molock
- "thanks man, I totally agree. they were ture badasses. just for the record I watched the 13th warrior for the first time ...what a great movie thanks for the heads up. it reminded me of a movie I like a lot called " kingdom of heaven" same kind of story line, it takes place during the crusades, the main character is a blacksmith who ends up fighting for the Christian holy city that's under attack buy Muslims. if you've never seen it check it out I think you'll like it. later bro"
Posted by molock on "sabotage" by molock
- "I totally agree overlord all the way if I have a choice. I wrote this a while back, my attempt at a heavy metal song. the art work comes from a band called "Molly Hatchet" They always had this kind of imagery on their album covers. as for the wicked witch I had to ask my girl what movie it was from 'cause I honestly have never seen that one ....people tell me that's weird. lol. Cheers my friend"
Posted by molock on "sabotage" by molock
- "Where blood is only a deeper shade of black. Admire the different take on a old standard; for a questioning that is as old as mankind. Cheers Mo! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "Maybe she was the wicked one (witch of the east) - make that the Witch of the West (good one) - I forget which now, cheers again! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "sabotage" by molock
- "Better an overlord than an underling I always say Mo. Enjoyed the nod to Shakespeare I believe, with the "Heavy hangs the head..." effectively employed and re-enforced by the later repetition. Sorcerers always seem to be the bad guys, except for Merlin and the Witch of the East. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "sabotage" by molock
- "I'm a big fan of the "live by the sword, die by the sword" era. I love the honor and courage that the warriors lived and died by in that time frame. One of my favorite movies of all time is The 13th Warrior. Get some Mo"
Posted by Damien on "sabotage" by molock
- "Damn I could hear the heavy guitars just reading this. A different side here from you mo and I'm liking it. Great lines as well. Well written bud."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "sabotage" by molock
- "thank you so much for dropping by and reading.
I appreciate the positive vibe
Cheers my friend - m0"
Posted by molock on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "thanks KB that means a lot. I truly cherish the genuine people in this community, and you with out a doubt you are one of them. peace my brother"
Posted by molock on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "thanks as always Drea, it means a lot that you take time to read my work. it's very humbling. it's good to hear from you, peace sis."
Posted by molock on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "old mo has a tender heart these days your comments as well as you work truly touch me. thank you so much. I raise my glass to you young lady ...Cheers!"
Posted by molock on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "thank you so much that means a lot to me. i got a positive vibe from you from the beginning, I feel like we have a lot in common. your work means a lot to me as well. you'll always have something to say because when you write you always have something meaningful to offer. I agree this community is special there are many genuine honest people here and I truly cherish that. God bless you as well my brother, later."
Posted by molock on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "Your imagery and lyrical way of writing has always impressed me. This ebbed and flowed. It was so soothing but spot on. Always a treat to read your words. "
Posted by Drea on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "I'm proud to be a part of this community and even prouder to know you Mo. Your work inspires me. In those times when I hit the wall and feel I have nothing more to say. That's the highest compliment I can give a writer. God bless and be well"
Posted by Damien on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "One of the things I love about your work and especially this piece is how the imagery and flow builds and builds throughout and once you hit that pinnacle, the fall back down is gentle but still leaves you breathing hard from the ride. This is so otherworldly and weightless that it almost seems to roll in waves an by the end, it all makes so much sense it's damn near senseless. This one stays with me. Thank you for sharing this."
Posted by Amaryllis on "M00n matrix" by molock
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