Comments by All Members
- " Oh wow this was very well-placed together but you don't really see it come together until the middle and then it has a really nice rhythm and a super cryptic pronunciation To the whole thing . It's almost beautifully defined in its most horrific form. Great write."
Posted by sIo on "Alone Together" by Crashoverride
- ""For who I am is not who I'm destined to be" - I like how that line floats in the midst of this piece like a hope, remembered and out context, but remembered nonetheless. Interesting piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Inkblots of Death" by Crashoverride
- ""Knowledge is power, but it's also all contained within the petals of a flower." This stanza was just beautiful. Your other work, the one that ponders about death, relates to this one in a special way. I find your rhymes quite clever, and your style very clean; even if each stanza goes to the next one in an almost frantic way."
Posted by Nimue44 on "being alive is being in pain" by Crashoverride
- "I really enjoyed this work, mostly because of its sincerity, its pace, and how through simple words you can express ingenious ideas and really inspire ponder. Brava!"
Posted by Nimue44 on "retrospectual adjustements" by Crashoverride
- "it can be easy to dwell in the past, but in my experience, very few times that i have tried to "fix" something "broken" have i actually succeeded. usually i just end up ruminating endlessly looking for the friend in me to show me what i need. or sometimes i forget it, or suppress it, and end up facing a similar problem in the future that seems to be almost worse because i had previously thought it was solved or at least that i had moved on from it. for me i like to dig deeper than the surface of what upsets me and it usually boils down to a fear of being afraid of loss, death, worthlessness, or whatever you want to call it. what im trying to say is that im not sure that there is a way to really fix any of this. instead, i like to view it as another piece of this vast complex puzzle i call myself.
thank you for welcoming me too, i was surprised to see positive reactions from my writing. i have about 300 poems ive written this year, most of em arent as dark as the two i posted up here, but much more inspirationally dark. ill start putting more up. thank you all for your thoughts and existence."
Posted by Crashoverride on "losing what was already lost" by Crashoverride
- ""They work their magic on my tragic kind" that was clever, I loved it. Everyone has issues with themselves, and this was a rhythmical developing of what troubles you. I hope this helped you getting it out! "
Posted by Nimue44 on "The Exit" by Crashoverride
- "Artful expression of emotional honesty. "The air between us", invokes the idea of ego being reflected esoterically. Meaning there is a wall of contrived separation willfully maintained. Kudos"
Posted by Flying indigo express on "The Exit" by Crashoverride
