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"Interesting. I'll have to google some of the references I think."
Posted by Unknown on "The House of the Celestial Waters" by Flying indigo express

"Thank you for the welcome. Indeed we do lose our way, however the irony is sometimes you find what you didn't know you were looking for."
Posted by Flying indigo express on "the moonlit smile" by Flying indigo express

"Unlike chrysalis which documents the process, this reflects how I thought and felt. You are correct in your assessment."
Posted by Flying indigo express on "the moonlit smile" by Flying indigo express

"And yes, the paradox of gain through loss. I have quoted lyrics on my profile page all about these paradoxical experiences. "
Posted by Cantara on "the moonlit smile" by Flying indigo express

""I found my piece of heaven not at all what I thought..." I love the unexpected twists in life. Things sometimes turn out in a way we would never have imagined. Or how sometimes, we land up loving that which we most hated. Sometimes the emptiness fills the void. How mysterious.... I love that this piece made me think on the majickal mysteries in life for a while..."
Posted by Cantara on "the moonlit smile" by Flying indigo express

"totally in agreement with all comments below...it is so relatable...and in that it is calming,but truthful...we all lose our way sometimes. thanks for this serene read... much needed...welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "the moonlit smile" by Flying indigo express

"I love the visual that you described. Very entertaining poem to read."
Posted by Unknown on "This Deceptively Deep Pond" by Flying indigo express

"It rings in your repetitions. Your line arrangement. Your meter. But that line ... that is the line right there. The one that drives the feeling through. Everything is conveyed in that line. Poignantly. "
Posted by Cantara on "Training Day" by Flying indigo express

"There is something about the tone of this one.... just under the surface .... I can feel it"
Posted by Cantara on "Training Day" by Flying indigo express

"I'm back. "They(?) won't release me now and I don't want to stay" ... *"They" what your eyes opened to. You wanted to be able to stay in denial and ignorance but you couldn't unsee what you saw? You were left with no choice but to follow it?"
Posted by Cantara on "Training Day" by Flying indigo express

"Once again, humbling me with praise. "
Posted by Flying indigo express on "An excerpt from " by Flying indigo express

"Yes. This inspired me. We owe it to ourselves; that's why we should never break the promises we make to ourselves. Quite repetitive my phrase here, but... *sigh*. You always leave me with this strange, soothing feeling of... hunger. Hunger to create."
Posted by Nimue44 on "An excerpt from " by Flying indigo express

"I feel like floating and breathing frozen stars. And also submerged in deep, deep water. LOTR, Dune... books I truly love, and such a way to weave words that I have to really concentrate, man... Brava!"
Posted by Nimue44 on "The House of the Celestial Waters" by Flying indigo express

"Interesting. An intriguing conversation, and naming. I wonder what sort of bird peace flowed within, I picture a white dove. Yet, I feel it goes beyond the norm. Nice inking, and celestial background. "
Posted by blue angel on "The House of the Celestial Waters" by Flying indigo express

"Wait. What? We gotta talk! My interest and curiosity are at their peak. You gotta touch those keys and tell us the rest."
Posted by Cantara on "The House of the Celestial Waters" by Flying indigo express

"What a story! You have a wonderful way of being descriptive in a truthful fashion. Beautiful "
Posted by mikeygreenleaf on "The House of the Celestial Waters" by Flying indigo express

"This.. even just the "tick tock" filles me with alarm. I'm so watchful of that damn clock."
Posted by Cantara on "An Empty Cup" by Flying indigo express

"Seems like a revelation that hit quite hard. But once we've seen it (where self deception kept us blind to the fault) we can never close our eyes to it again. There's no going back. Never to get tangled up again. Beautifully, eloquently and clearly expressed. "
Posted by Cantara on "The End of the Beginning" by Flying indigo express

"Love it!!! One I will not forget as it got my mind going in circles - one more hint please?!"
Posted by Unknown on "Training Day" by Flying indigo express

"I have been looking for it but is has been endlessly overcast in the evenings ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Seven Points to the Star" by Flying indigo express

"Also, my head is an interesting place, part modern art museum, part carnival freaks show."
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Seven Points to the Star" by Flying indigo express

"It is interesting that nearly all peoples have legends in a similar vane to the Pleiades. Did you know there is a comet currently traversing the Pleiades?"
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Seven Points to the Star" by Flying indigo express

"I certainly will try. There seems that every set of works becomes preliminary work for some new."
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Seven Points to the Star" by Flying indigo express

"Interesting too , the Indigenous Australians have dreamtime stories about the Pleiades , also seven sisters , who appear in the night sky in the season of berries and good hunting , pursued by three brothers ( we know as Orion's belt ) These are special stars they are always pleased to see in the season of abundance , sometimes referred to as wishing stars."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Seven Points to the Star" by Flying indigo express

"This is really cool! I'd love to know what 7 means to you and what star you are referring to? Maybe in an email? I love all the symbolism in almost every line. It creates a whole other layer of meaning under the words on the surface. You are just overflowing with knowledge aren't you! I don't know who the 7 sisters are either?? I just love the feeling behind this one and the great energy I (and I'm sure all who read it) pick up on while reading this. It made me feel good... That's some pretty powerful stuff that is the driving force behind this poem. Potent intent and focus. It's gonna happen... you will make it so."
Posted by Cantara on "Seven Points to the Star" by Flying indigo express

"That is why I loath to interpret my own art. In a way, it is selfish as it robs the personalized meanings others have ascribed. Thereby ruining the chance to broaden perspectives through others, once again embracing self involvement/devolvement (I just made it up)"
Posted by Flying indigo express on "The Apparition of Pleasure" by Flying indigo express

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