The House of the Celestial Waters
By Flying indigo express
-a poetic reflection of a very real visit home-
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The universe trembled within feeble hands
The eye of the beholden sunk within
Infinity became a ceiling
Sandalphon revealing
How cute, the pillar appears a child
Eternal power cloaked as mild
Intent and result became the same
Traveled to a place divination proclaimed
The House of the Celestial Waters
Doors opened without a word
The breeze was a hurricane
Initiation now had a name
The Lady of the House her form chosen
Revealed the Mother Superior Jessica
Arrakis I said? Your own thoughts
I prefer Galadriel myself
Then the witch of the woods was
Perfect fit just because, an elven kiss
The seven sisters sang
The Lady of the House gave me a name
Sandalphon was quick to say
Don't worry, you've earned that name
Then the ends message was clear
Why this form had come to here
Training day now transformed
A drama not to be concerned
Knight of the House of Celestial Waters
Indigo ray 7th and potent
Abandon thine throne and take thee a horse
20 degrees of Libra and Scorpio of course
To the overlook of the manor I see
Endless moores of eternity
The friar seemed to be
A circle of eternity
A billion fiery points of light
Stood together center of night
Confused my wind carried the word
Peace flowed within upon a bird
Every observer is the center of their 'verse
We see all points the same in a name
Author's Note:
In the works, I've got to get off my phone and touch real keys to finishComments on "The House of the Celestial Waters"
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On Wednesday, April 8, 2015, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Behold the Pale Horse rides...even through the fields of Elysium.Quite a bit of information packed into so few words, yet volumes of understanding could be extracted.Nice work.
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On Tuesday, March 24, 2015, Phalanx
(628) wrote:
I think this means you have to understand who you are; to perceive where you've been; to know where you're going. Not a bad drift.
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A former member wrote:
Interesting. I'll have to google some of the references I think.
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On Friday, January 30, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
I feel like floating and breathing frozen stars. And also submerged in deep, deep water. LOTR, Dune... books I truly love, and such a way to weave words that I have to really concentrate, man... Brava!
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On Thursday, January 29, 2015, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Interesting. An intriguing conversation, and naming. I wonder what sort of bird peace flowed within, I picture a white dove. Yet, I feel it goes beyond the norm. Nice inking, and celestial background.
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On Sunday, January 25, 2015, mikeygreenleaf
(89) wrote:
What a story! You have a wonderful way of being descriptive in a truthful fashion. Beautiful
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On Sunday, January 25, 2015, Flying indigo express
(148) wrote:
Thank you my friend!