Comments by All Members
- "The last stanza in Nr:two splayed a wicked grin across my face, a delicious write indeed. All three were marvelously penned, nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "Bet and Lose" by Nimue44
- "At times all one can do is sing, but flying with clipped wings is impressive indeed. Superbly written, a snowy winter tale unfolded before my eyes."
Posted by Unknown on "Moon of October" by Nimue44
- "Damn! Excellent imagery and an absolutely sublime story. Great would be an understatement -- Absolutely loved it. 10.
Keep it up and blessed be
~peace"
Posted by nkronsch on "Moon of October" by Nimue44
- "Immanent is correct (something inherent, existing within another thing) but I did not notice the other typos, thank you. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "Soho Mihi!" by Nimue44
- "Just saw flames that had no fuel other than it's own desire to keep burning. I liked this piece."
Posted by Forgotten Silence on "Ashes" by Nimue44
- "
With that being said, this piece should be taken in all seriousness. I read your mother tongue was Spanish, so here are a few typos I noticed:
imminent*
Rememberance* as opposed to remember.
sown* as opposed to sowned.
I would choose call (fall of the scythe) as opposed to roar; A poet should be definitive... but that is only my opinion.
Overcome* no need for (s)
Once again, powerful work.. clear these typos and the read will be much smoother and able to appreciate the content."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Soho Mihi!" by Nimue44
- "Felt as if the poem was speaking to me, pulling me in, rather than a simple read. Kept me enthralled throughout.
"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Soho Mihi!" by Nimue44
- ""They will realize
that time and wind
are cunning thieves."
Enthralling work, pristine flow that allows the content to mesmerize"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Cunning Waltz" by Nimue44
- "May perhaps it would buy you a little more time, distraction works like a charm. Nicely penned."
Posted by Unknown on "Malum" by Nimue44
- "Betrayal, few things cut as deeply I imagine, one advantage to not trusting easily I suppose. A saddening piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Carmine" by Nimue44
- "'Actions ripple likened to a pebble in a pond' a subtle power to this work I really like."
Posted by Unknown on "Thunder" by Nimue44
- "Your comment would even fit in the poem. I thank you. I'll write it down and keep it in my pocket."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Cunning Waltz" by Nimue44
- "I agree. That's why always something (anything, even if consumed as ashes) remains."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Ashes" by Nimue44
- "Some voices can never say goodbye, otherwise the silence would be far too deafening."
Posted by Unknown on "Ashes" by Nimue44
- "I appreciate that, and it's nice to know I drew an image in your head, one dark and sweet. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "Malum" by Nimue44
- "I enjoyed this piece, I particularly liked the mental picture created by the lines "Would Death spare us if we tell her a tale,
One dark and sweet?" That is an interesting notion! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Malum" by Nimue44
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