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"I read this last night and had to get off before I could properly comment...This is, as elisa stated, like watching love starve to death...this is painfully familiar...very nice write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "As Lonely As Possible" by A Broken Soul

"these words beat with a throbing ache........it's like watching love starve to death..."
Posted by elisa on "As Lonely As Possible" by A Broken Soul

"This is funny I never thought to write about fast food...I guess boredom bring strange ideas"
Posted by Myrrhkuri the fallen one on "Complete Boredom= Poem about McDonald's" by A Broken Soul

"I like this song...it just rings the truth don't it? No one wants to admit things are too hard and oh how easily we lose control..."
Posted by Myrrhkuri the fallen one on "Some Words You Might Care to Hear" by A Broken Soul

"Wow, now I found another about me. I love you so much and I miss you. I need to write you a poem. Kit"
Posted by Kitty_LostInHerOwnMind on "Some Words You Might Care to Hear" by A Broken Soul

"Damn..."Without you here...life just sometimes seems pointless"...I think a lot of people can relate to these emotions, even if they don't want to admit it. I agree with both ErrOr and Soldiers Girl...this hit hard. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Some Words You Might Care to Hear" by A Broken Soul

"Well this left a sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach, I can agree with Soldier here, but sometimes I like to feel these things- Great job on in envoking such emotion in others. :) "
Posted by Err0r on "Some Words You Might Care to Hear" by A Broken Soul

"Definatly feelings I know. This hit me too hard to want to stay up tonight. I think after this I may turn in and try to get the emotion this gave me to leave. -Courtney"
Posted by Army Barbie on "Some Words You Might Care to Hear" by A Broken Soul

"Why: You remember how good the food is when you are starving, it tastes good (cause it's mostly fat, and fat tastes good) and you're happy to leave becuase you feel sick (and the chair are designed uncomfortably).~T~"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Complete Boredom= Poem about McDonald's" by A Broken Soul

"As a psych. teacher once told me, McDonalds slogan is to make you happy to buy your food, happy to eat it, and happy to leave. "
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Complete Boredom= Poem about McDonald's" by A Broken Soul

"mmm.. I loved the way this just rippled down the page in melancholy tempo.. nice. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Fantasy World" by A Broken Soul

"I agree with Fairy, I can relate...this is wonderful...the last seven lines hit me hardest. Nice piece. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Yours to Take Advantage of" by A Broken Soul

"Nice work, I can really relate, I'm adding this to my favorites.. -Fairy"
Posted by Beautiful Scars on "Yours to Take Advantage of" by A Broken Soul

"interesting society is fucked up nice work"
Posted by Unknown on "Who Cares? (Well I Do!)" by A Broken Soul

"this is a powerful statement on the on americain culture.....youve captured the feeling of allmost an entire nation, well done"
Posted by Unknown on "Who Cares? (Well I Do!)" by A Broken Soul

"And I'll be in my easy chairr laughing, but then I'd probably cry considering as it burns, I'm in the states. - Damn. :D Nice write."
Posted by Err0r on "Who Cares? (Well I Do!)" by A Broken Soul

"good write; ty for sharing"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Yours to Take Advantage of" by A Broken Soul

" I wasn't really into the first part of this but, the last two stanzas have a lot of potential. :)"
Posted by Crysa on "Yours to Take Advantage of" by A Broken Soul

"I wonder sometimes if I'm better off dead too."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Yours to Take Advantage of" by A Broken Soul

"this was very effective in making me pissed off about fast food joints. it's true, they are always two blocks from a hospital...bastards. good write, good read. "
Posted by girlafraid on "Only 99 Cents (Oh My! What a Deal!)" by A Broken Soul

"Seeing fast food through new eys now."
Posted by Unknown on "Only 99 Cents (Oh My! What a Deal!)" by A Broken Soul

"You've made me care about this and that makes it effective. Well written. Good job. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Only 99 Cents (Oh My! What a Deal!)" by A Broken Soul

"I like this a lot. I did one like it but more about Wal-Mart and less about McDonalds. killer chorus "feed feed the beast of greed. its call is too loud to ignore. feed feed this animal need you bargain shopping whore""
Posted by glasshouse on "Only 99 Cents (Oh My! What a Deal!)" by A Broken Soul

"There's a beauty to this concept.. perhaps because its a familiar feeling, love it -Cor"
Posted by PaperPromises on "I'll Never See Your Smile Again" by A Broken Soul

""Before it's too late I should let go" -so true...great write "
Posted by Labitina on "I'll Make You Love Me" by A Broken Soul

"Holy hell I love this! You've got a nice style. I'll make sure and check some more of your stuff out."
Posted by VenomPlease on "I'm sorry I can't measure up..." by A Broken Soul

"ugh, I sink into these words all too perfectly, ...it hurts, badly, thank you I guess, ha. ~b"
Posted by blue on "I'm sorry I can't measure up..." by A Broken Soul

"theres always someone who we cant grasp on to for love i like your work"
Posted by Unknown on "I'll Make You Love Me" by A Broken Soul

"yeah I really like this one. nice work."
Posted by Dark Goth on "I'll Make You Love Me" by A Broken Soul

""Can you lie and say that you love me?" hehe, love that line..."
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "I'll Make You Love Me" by A Broken Soul

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