Comments by All Members

  • "i love this. i can feel how desperate you are for release from that which holds you close unwillingly...."
    Posted by sIo on "A Midnight Conversation" by Munkey
  • "i agree with stalker you want it to seem the same as the original...just morbid and intriguing...i like it alot. "
    Posted by sIo on "Dying Man's Prayer" by Munkey
  • "...I'm wondering, what sort of sound would you have this going to...? I can fathom a few different possibilities for it; just wondered what you were aiming for..."
    Posted by SilentStalker on "Bury Her Deep" by Munkey
  • "...the second line is offbeat...how about 'I pray my soul for none to keep'...? and the same for the fourth line; just kill of the 'cuz'...not only will it give it perfect rhythm, but it just might appeal more to others..."
    Posted by SilentStalker on "Dying Man's Prayer" by Munkey
  • "i'll try for you...thats the nicest sentiment i've seen in a godforsaken while...coolness"
    Posted by Solace on "For You" by Munkey
  • "::bravo:: i love the way you word both of them this one is so sad i dont know if its because of the way you described her death or what but this is very very well writen amazin ~darlin :)"
    Posted by darkangelXlll on "A Midnight Conversation (Part 2)" by Munkey
  • "thats usually how it works...no. thats how it always happens. i have a suspicion that the people who actually have someone settled because they were tired of chasing what they actually want. doesnt reality just make you wanna rip out your own eyes?"
    Posted by Twilight on "How come I never get the girl?" by Munkey
  • "I hope that one day someone will say something about this song....it would be nice. I wrote it about this hot goth girl that I found out really thought I was hot about six months ago."
    Posted by Munkey on "How come I never get the girl?" by Munkey
  • "This is awesome...however, the tenth and eleventh stanzas seem somehow out of place...the rest is just...perfect."
    Posted by Unknown on "Bury Her Deep" by Munkey
  • "this is great i loved the ending and all of it i read this first normally then from end to start and its a very impressing and extrodinary write ::bravo:: ~darlin :) "
    Posted by darkangelXlll on "A Midnight Conversation" by Munkey
  • "*whispers* 'he's gone now' * hoping to be spared* Damn this is some impressive writing:) I eagerly wait to hear how this works out.... elisa"
    Posted by elisa on "A Midnight Conversation" by Munkey
[Next]
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [All Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.