Comments by All Members
- "delicately woven words of sadness, the last stanza wrapped it up so nicely..well done again. ~b"
Posted by blue on "# 04" by december
- "****4 big stars!!! ...this just completely flooded me...You are among the greats! ~favs~ ~b"
Posted by blue on "# 05" by december
- "...my god, I am always short of words after reading your work. :) Brilliant! ~b"
Posted by blue on "# 06" by december
- "..oh!! I am just hanging on every beautiful word. You are a truly amazing writer. I am SO glad I found you again!!! I'm putting you on my *fav poets* list. Sincerely, Brian."
Posted by blue on "# 02" by december
- "..so great! Such a powerful write. Size matters not with great poetry! :) ~b"
Posted by blue on "# 07" by december
- "..blinding and direct...you're a wonderful writer, I read one of yours before but sadly forgot your name. Glad I found you again. ~b"
Posted by blue on "# 01" by december
- "the scheme and flow on this is very well done. Hits hard and sad, great work."
Posted by NikesRain on "# 03" by december
- "very vivid, with a sadness I can certainly relate to. Nice write and welcome to dp."
Posted by NikesRain on "# 01" by december
- "excellent piece; vivid and impressively original depiction; i love the ending especially."
Posted by purr_verse on "# 01" by december
- "this is nicely done--well written--the second stanza is awesome"
Posted by Northstar on "# 03" by december
- "Gorgeous imagery with meaningful commentary on top... what more could I ask for? Welcome to DP, and welcome to my favorites list."
Posted by stormtalk on "# 05" by december
- "Such lovely pain is spun by romance. Admittedly, I found your other works more brilliant than this, though this remains well above par. You write very well... I will be reading."
Posted by stormtalk on "# 04" by december
- "This is perhaps the only poem I've read with the same line starting each stanza where I haven't skipped the majority of it. The rhyme scheme worked well with it, and you kept the beat skullfully. I hope November shows her its beauty and changes her mind.."
Posted by stormtalk on "# 03" by december
- "Haunting, wistful, dream-like... a positively gorgeous phantasmagoria."
Posted by stormtalk on "# 02" by december
- "I welcome you... and you write very well. You offer color, then rip it all away; you pose the questions everyone silently asks themselves..."
Posted by stormtalk on "# 01" by december
