# 07

By december

tumbling through blue skies
nervously awaiting this,
my final moment..

could god's breath be as sweet as
the wind igniting my lungs?

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Copyright 2004 december
Published on Sunday, August 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, December 2, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I loved how this piece flowed. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Eric On Monday, June 11, 2007, Eric (77)By person wrote:

    Loved it. beautifully written.

  • Tonights Decision On Monday, June 19, 2006, Tonights Decision (132)By person wrote:

    in yhe moment agin. well done.

  • blue On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    ..so great! Such a powerful write. Size matters not with great poetry! :) ~b

  • knightmirror On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    wow....incredible.....beautiful question.....i like a lot.....-knight

  • OnyxOasis On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, OnyxOasis (3)By person wrote:

    I like these poems - all fearless and very touching.

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