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# 04
By december
i'd give anything
just to trace
the outline of your jaw,
the hard lines of your face..
when you greet me with that
hypnotic stare,
my heart aches
i cannot bear..
one more breath
without you near,
when i sleep at night
it's your voice i hear,
whispering, echoing
in my brain,
sometimes i know
i can't maintain,
this peaceful distance,
it's so hard to try..
it's times like this
i'd love to die..
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Copyright 2004 december
Published on Sunday, August 22, 2004.
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Comments on "# 04"
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A former member wrote:
i know this all to well..such a shuddering feeling. this is amazing.
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, blue
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wrote:
delicately woven words of sadness, the last stanza wrapped it up so nicely..well done again. ~b
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Such lovely pain is spun by romance. Admittedly, I found your other works more brilliant than this, though this remains well above par. You write very well... I will be reading.
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