Comments by All Members
- "i've heard of this disease somewhere in my studies...but no textbook could have described what you have captured here. what a devastating loss...the fragility of the mind and body is terrifying.
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Posted by girlafraid on "LEWY BODY DISEASE" by Zhee
- "the last 3 stanzas i found the best here,really drew me in with the imagery,meaning and intelligent way of writing it"
Posted by Anth on "The Altar" by Zhee
- "this is exquisitely done--the images, flow, and structure are so on point--I really feel what you are expressing here"
Posted by Northstar on "Desert In My Eyes..." by Zhee
- "this is an awesome piece--I love the stanza "The voices imprisoned/In the subjugated mind/Scream themselves hoarse/As they claw each other blind""
Posted by Northstar on "The Altar" by Zhee
- "Every so often something like this comes along and you say to yourself, "Wow.""
Posted by ONEANDLONELY on "The Altar" by Zhee
- "Very good. This reminds me a bit of Mother Teresa when she lived in Calcutta. We need more people like you in the world to unravel our own masks. Thank you. ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Mask of Sanity" by Zhee
- "Have you read my 'Damned Deviled Ham' (#1) poem? It might make your karma run over your dogma! Don't chase me down w/your damned pitchfork, PLEASE! ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "Make Me Believe!" by Zhee
- "I was just listening to a song about the title you gave to this poem... Nice. *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "Make Me Believe!" by Zhee
- "I don't think I am "god defiling demon" but for some reason I keep thinking this poem was to me."
Posted by Unknown on "Make Me Believe!" by Zhee
- "I agree that this is well thought out with many emotions showing in and almost something I screamed at my English teacher today actually. How ironic! Bethany"
Posted by Soulseeker on "Make Me Believe!" by Zhee
- "Just dropped in to see what condition your condition was in... Goooooood writing. ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "FILTH" by Zhee
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