Comments by All Members
- "_i love the way you structured this...i found myself falling into this more with each word...and each word hit with more force than the last.awesome,Belle.:)"
Posted by suicideseason on "Brazil" by Belle
- "I love the ending...this is a great piece. It all ties in together...and the structure is perfect."
Posted by Unknown on "Brazil" by Belle
- "This poem has so much feeling... I really like it..."
Posted by MGood on "heroine" by Belle
- "Sensational. Beautiful. Gripping. It felt like a series of suspensful songs. I like this one a lot. -Glass "
Posted by glasshouse on "Take it." by Belle
- "Honest and beauitful. A hope that speaks deeper than these words. Your work, again, is magnificant. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Your army" by Belle
- "this is an amazing peice. so many can relate to these feelings, yet never express them the way you have. awesome ~serpentine~"
Posted by Unknown on "heroine" by Belle
- "I agree with all....this one left me speechless. I've been dragged through hell and spit out into the sky, feel like shit, yet so glad of it. Great write Belle."
Posted by Six-Out on "Cherry Cola" by Belle
- "I don't know if I can do this justice with a comment. There are so many things in this that I want to point out. I'll have to talk to you on AIM about this."
Posted by Rebirth on "Cherry Cola" by Belle
- "wearing your heart on your sleeve. I think the lines that stood out the most for me were, "But there is no allowance for that word/In my crown or form" again it's wonderful work."
Posted by Rebirth on "picturesque" by Belle
- "like a shot to the chest, this made it hard to breathe for a minute. Great write."
Posted by Rebirth on "heroine" by Belle
- "it's really awesome....i love it! I can't stop reading it!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "heroine" by Belle
- "This...hit me..harder than I'd like... wonderfuly played out..."
Posted by Six-Out on "heroine" by Belle
- "Again, you're endings are incredible... i really like this, the title as well... good write deary. Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Linens" by Belle
- "i can't putit better than Glass, however, this is sensational... with the poems of yours i have read thus far you're endings are bombshells... incredible. -Mayor of Chump City"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Cherry Cola" by Belle
- "...I'm stutterring and tripping on my brain. Total fuckin favorite darlin'. Awesome. Sue Zen"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "heroine" by Belle
- "The last 4 lines were absolutely amazing. The whole piece was. I love your work. I really do. Another great piece. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "heroine" by Belle
- "Holy piss... this was magnificant on a billion different levels. You grabbed my hands and pulled me along for this ride. All the way through its was consistant and beautiful. Great write. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Cherry Cola" by Belle
- "I am dormant in this division of winter-beautiful wording...the transformation at the end was stunning...
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Posted by girlafraid on "picturesque" by Belle
- "hmm spent a bit of time tryign to figure out what comment to leave behind..and i stillcan't do it. this left a heavy feeling behind it"
Posted by nell on "Lover. Martyr." by Belle
- ""I must rebuild this identity
So that you can find new holes in me" I loved this whole piece... it was driven deep. Good write. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "picturesque" by Belle
- "Oh wow. This piece felt like it drug me behind it. Just holding on to every word... afraid to let go because I felt it so deeply. This was astonishing. GREAT piece here. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Lover. Martyr." by Belle
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