Comments by All Members
- "i know your angry but be honest with yourself you did care about her, perhaps even loved her, by what is sounds like she lied to you about something and hurt you deeply , i have written things like this too just to get out the anger out and yes it helps but the truth will set you free. try being a little more honest with your feelings. just a suggestion what do i know though right.
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Posted by Anoblechicken on "Glad Your Not Here" by Dark Goth
- "Thanks for the suggestion but I'm not changing anything. This poem says it all too perfectly. Sometimes one person's absence is enough to move on."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Glad Your Not Here" by Dark Goth
- "emphasis on being glad of their absence is really punched into your face here, with the profanity preceding and the fact it was capitalized every time I can see. Certainly a strong piece here. *salutes*"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Glad Your Not Here" by Dark Goth
- "Theres a constructive wrath coming your way, i've felt it before...write on you crazy diamond....~The picture in your account stops time, where was it taken?"
Posted by Unknown on "Wasted Years" by Dark Goth
- "This poem is dedicated to this girl who left me and stole from me, then told all my friends lies about me. Now all my friends hate me. Fuck You Bitch!"
Posted by Dark Goth on "You've Taken Everything" by Dark Goth
- "Ok you got into my favorites. DoomTroll claps his hands. Almost as good as the song Let Jesus fuck you."
Posted by Wolk on "Rotting Christ" by Dark Goth
- "YOU WILL SUFFER FOR THAT, MUCH MOR THAN I WILL FOR MY PIECES "I'M SO TIRED OF BEING HERE" AND "DEATH"...."
Posted by Unknown on "Rotting Christ" by Dark Goth
- "i feel your pain, love. Depression is not a will it's a curse. I hope everything in life goes well for you in the future. You deserve it because you have such a beautiful soul and that was shown here. great write *J*"
Posted by Jerrica on "Gloomy Days Darker Nights" by Dark Goth
- "There's a 2 after this cause I already wrote one note. the first one is in my profile. this is about ending it all cause someone you cared for took everything from you and you can't go on without them."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Suicide Note 2" by Dark Goth
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