Everything Is Wrong

By Dark Goth

Don't you have one of those days
When nothing turns out being right
Doesn't matter what you do or say
You end up blinded like the night
Sit alone and just think about it
Why did this all take so damn long
Waste away and drink about it
You found out Everything Is Wrong

You have worked so hard to get this far
You want to make this dream come true
Get started move forward with this life
Maybe now you won't need that sharp knife
Then everyone goes and turns their back on you
In the end there is nothing that you can do
Left here alone and no one will care
Stuck in one place you found no one there

Right now all of your dreams have died
Can't find any reason to continue on
You think that everything is done
There is another fight you have not won
You went to see your closest friend
They never want to see you again
Now you want to leave this dumb life
Your friend lies within that sharp knife

Why did this all take so damn long
You found out Everything Is Wrong

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Copyright 2004 darkgoth
Published on Saturday, June 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • weyvern On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    my goodness you continue to shock me! damn good poem!

  • Dommi On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Dommi (96)By person wrote:

    This was one of those works that holds you and doesn't let go... and what a chilling, but worth-while grasp.

  • A former member wrote: i LOVE it im going to add you to my fav. poets. i love everything u have written so far.keep it up.

  • yslehc On Saturday, July 24, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    i've read this before hehe but it's still good :D

  • capt_funguy On Saturday, July 24, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    "waste away and drink about it ...." that's a fuckin' winner ... a true gem , in a golden piece of poetry ... dug it ... funguy

  • A former member wrote: WOW, thank you so much for writting this. Were you right next to me the past few yrs. Goddamn that is damn near a perfect description of it.

  • Heart of Stone On Monday, July 5, 2004, Heart of Stone (24)By person wrote:

    I'll always need that sharp knife. Beautiful write. I know all of these feelings too well. Very nice. -Heart

  • OLd SouL On Saturday, June 26, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    eh, an optimist.

  • A former member wrote: yesterday I had that, I wrecked my car and the day went down hill from there, Good write

  • Cwn Annwn On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Cwn Annwn (91)By person wrote:

    wow...this is exactly how I feel tonight....everything is wrong....nicely put~GoNe~

  • A former member wrote: well worded, structured and...yeah a very capturing peice...well done...I-S .Azz

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