Everything Is Wrong
By Dark Goth
Don't you have one of those days
When nothing turns out being right
Doesn't matter what you do or say
You end up blinded like the night
Sit alone and just think about it
Why did this all take so damn long
Waste away and drink about it
You found out Everything Is Wrong
You have worked so hard to get this far
You want to make this dream come true
Get started move forward with this life
Maybe now you won't need that sharp knife
Then everyone goes and turns their back on you
In the end there is nothing that you can do
Left here alone and no one will care
Stuck in one place you found no one there
Right now all of your dreams have died
Can't find any reason to continue on
You think that everything is done
There is another fight you have not won
You went to see your closest friend
They never want to see you again
Now you want to leave this dumb life
Your friend lies within that sharp knife
Why did this all take so damn long
You found out Everything Is Wrong
Comments on "Everything Is Wrong"
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On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
my goodness you continue to shock me! damn good poem!
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Dommi
(95) wrote:
This was one of those works that holds you and doesn't let go... and what a chilling, but worth-while grasp.
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A former member wrote:
i LOVE it im going to add you to my fav. poets. i love everything u have written so far.keep it up.
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
i've read this before hehe but it's still good :D
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
"waste away and drink about it ...." that's a fuckin' winner ... a true gem , in a golden piece of poetry ... dug it ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
WOW, thank you so much for writting this. Were you right next to me the past few yrs. Goddamn that is damn near a perfect description of it.
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On Monday, July 5, 2004, Heart of Stone
(24) wrote:
I'll always need that sharp knife. Beautiful write. I know all of these feelings too well. Very nice. -Heart
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
eh, an optimist.
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A former member wrote:
yesterday I had that, I wrecked my car and the day went down hill from there, Good write
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(89) wrote:
wow...this is exactly how I feel tonight....everything is wrong....nicely put~GoNe~
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A former member wrote:
well worded, structured and...yeah a very capturing peice...well done...I-S .Azz