Bloody Valentine

By Dark Goth

Be my Bloody Valentine
Cut you wide open to make you mine

Drink your blood feel the taste
See the blood cover your face

Feel this knife in your throat bleed
Pain and suffering is what you need

I want your heart so cut it out
Deep inside you scream and shout

The pain you feel is too real
Bleed some more until you can't deal

Soon to be my doomed lover
Take your life and destroy another

Set your bleeding heart on fire
Satisfy this burning desire

Bloody Valentine you get me high
Then cut our hearts up until we die

Bloody Valentine
I bleed for you tonight
Bloody Valentine
Watch me bleed until I die

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Copyright 2005 darkgoth
Published on Tuesday, February 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Ona scale from 1-7 i give it a 5-PERSEVERANCE-

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write. Very bloody with lots of gore. ~*~Tart~*~

  • yslehc On Saturday, February 19, 2005, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    hahaha i love it rusty :P ..good job

  • Cutting_for_Freedom On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom (34)By person wrote:

    Oh,I like very much so.

  • A former member wrote: wow if you only knew how much this relates today good write ~~GOTHIC~~

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    twisted...i love it!

  • Dark Goth On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, Dark Goth (43)By person wrote:

    thank you

  • A former member wrote: Wow so dark and mysterious I love this one.

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