Suicide Note

By Dark Goth

Everything has gone away
There's nothing more to live for
Everyone will still say
They don't care about you anymore
Too much stress everyday
You want it all to end
Too much pressure to deal with
When no one wants to be your friend
You grab a sharp knife
Begin to cut your throat
See the blood drip out
You start to end your life

As you bleed you cut more
Your arms your wrists bleed
The pain is too much to handle
Going into death is what you need
You want to speed up the time
Less pain with a faster death
Stab the knife into your head
Then you lie there bleeding and dead
Now you're dead and think why
There was people that did care
It's too late to go back now
All you can do is sit and stare

I WATCHED ALL OF THIS TAKE PLACE
AS YOU SHOVED THE KNIFE INTO YOUR FACE
I DID NOTHING TO STOP YOU
YOU ARE A FUCKING STUPID COWARD
YOU THOUGHT NO ONE CARED ABOUT YOU
SO THIS IS ALL THAT YOU WANT TO DO
INSTEAD OF STOPPING YOU I SAY FUCK DEBATING
IT'S BETTER TO END YOUR LIFE NOW
THAN TO KEEP GOD WAITING
GO SHOOT YOUR FUCKING HEAD OFF
YOU FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT
FUCKING DIE

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Copyright 2004 darkgoth
Published on Tuesday, August 31, 2004.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "Suicide Note"

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  • A former member wrote: It shows a really nice perspective of suicide from a third person's point-of-view. The end does a great job of adding a subjective opinion to the beginning which seemed to just describe what was happening.

  • A former member wrote: Oh god, the end threw me off so much. But still, awesome poem

  • A former member wrote: nicely done...reminds me of the son Die MF Die by Dope

  • Savannah On Sunday, December 12, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    wow! I feel like you screamed this at me. Well done..awesome

  • A former member wrote: powerfull

  • A former member wrote: Ummm, Damn. I like this. I like how it gets even more powerful and intense towards the ending. The whole write just captured me and took me for a spin. Awesome job.

  • A former member wrote: Very true, and a very nice write. Suicide is quite a tragic thing *sigh* ~Unholyme

  • A former member wrote: Heh well I liked the last one. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • yslehc On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    nice poem.. actually its very not nice... but .. you know what i mean

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