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"Although in its entirety it is wonderful....the fifth stanza's opening lines bit the hardest... Well wrought in a fanfare of emotion!"
Posted by natalie on "American Beauty { re-written]" by Numbers Peppelini

"you managed to make one of the world's ugliest things beautiful. i love a poem with the phrase "snot bubbles" in it. never thought i'd see the day. actually, i never thought about it at all. thank you for making me thinks things i never would have thunk otherwise. ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Glass Mercedes" by Numbers Peppelini

"green eyes are always the most haunting... i'm crying. i can't help it... i want to be remembered like this. "
Posted by Unknown on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini

""send in the clowns".. i have just read everything you have posted, and i am swelling with a confusing mixture of dignified hope, swooning crooning lust, intrigued muse, a quiet melancholy, and the deepest, most wrenching despair. i am utterly wrecked..... you are an exquisite individual, and it's a little upsetting how damned good you are at this, at making me feel against my will. blessings, sir. "
Posted by Unknown on "American Beauty { re-written]" by Numbers Peppelini

""to have loved her forever as her train rumbled pass me in the opposite direction" - these are great lines! I love your work, man. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini

"Impressive. I enjoy reading your poems sir."
Posted by Unknown on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini

"what a fantastic write!! I like everything about this. it flows so nicely and really was a pleasure to read.. Nice write :)"
Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "Veronica " by Numbers Peppelini

"Madeline leans forward with her palm to quiet the light in her man's eyes... The lump in my throat swelled here. You capture this mournful moment in monumental proportions. The symbolizing of the soft rain with dove and the whippoorwill are versed treasures, Thank you for sharing****"
Posted by blue angel on "Dying next to a whippoorwill" by Numbers Peppelini

"The part that touched me the most was Madeline's silence. Sometimes, with a love as strong as this, silence says it all. Thank you for yet another wonderful read :) "
Posted by Unknown on "Dying next to a whippoorwill" by Numbers Peppelini

"Beautifully written and a delectable read. Thank you for sharing such an amazingly touching and heartfelt write :) "
Posted by Unknown on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"jesus. I have seen this....and here it is again. So close to my neck. Carotid pounding, pushing all of these emotions and words through the rest of me, from hairline to fingertip to heel. Where isn't this? This is a multi-dimensional, saturated-soul, murdering-cosmos kind of piece, where every cell listens and your ears and mind are just present for the presentation. I hope you never stop writing and I hope you never leave this place. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Dying next to a whippoorwill" by Numbers Peppelini

"this is brilliant writing, you have captured the essence of spirit. very impressive!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dying next to a whippoorwill" by Numbers Peppelini

"This is very sad and delicate, I really enjoyed it. I like how Madeline is the one to close her lovers eyes. It's very sweet and beautiful to me. Great job! :) "
Posted by Unknown on "Dying next to a whippoorwill" by Numbers Peppelini

"If this indeed is a sample of heaven's nectar, it certainly fell from your abundance. Forever grateful"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"Wonderful imagery and well written is the the strong part of the sword blade to which you possess. So I shall thank you for your inspiration."
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"The inner battle penned from the inkwell of liberation from the self. I get it.....What would I do without you. { smiles }"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"Thanks my friend for your comment. You know, it's not so much the place I described, as it is all that goes on once I'm there. What I penned perhaps is merely the portal"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"...those sweetest memories that we can bring alive at any time, that bind us in pleasure when we conjure them, until we return to the mundane..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"Often I stop in reflect upon myself to realize I have no idea who I am or how I have gotten here. The ending stanzas force the reader to make such an assessment... Only to conquer more questions. The rhythm started off as honey suckle and dew drops. The ending wafted in the air as only garbage can. Great write. Wonderfully inner-battle pen you have."
Posted by tmanzano on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"Wonderful imagery, and extremely well written. 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"A sample of heaven's nectar. This is a delight and I savor it. Alive in the awareness as it's sending sensations of imperial appreciation. She left quite the impression on a young boy's pliable imagination. I adore it :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"Thanks so much for stopping by to comment"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"This is an true piece, makes me stop and think about what is going on in life. Makes me want to know more. I really liked it. Great job!"
Posted by Unknown on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"this is very well written with many questions to ponder. thought provoking daydreams, what a country huh?"
Posted by Unknown on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"Very nice flow and creativity to this piece, with a jolt back to reality in the closing. Very "Walter Mitty"ish, in a sense, but more focused on the feelings behind the daydreams. Quite good."
Posted by Sketso on "Be Back Come Morning" by Numbers Peppelini

"awh this is so sweet and beautiful , sounds like quite the girl!"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini

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