Comments by All Members
- "Well constructed and very captivating, but also devastating. I fear this story is true. It all too often is, anyway. It filled me with anger and sorrow. I would be willing to be the one to deliver to him justice."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Big Bad Wolf" by aXe FactoR
- "this reads like a song that brings the mind to richer thoughts of bigger bolder things. never stop. miss u babe."
Posted by sixsixnine on "Mix & swallow" by aXe FactoR
- "It makes sense. It sort of flows, but sort of just doesn't. It takes time to make something like that work. And you make it work very well."
Posted by PoeticHellion on "Mix & swallow" by aXe FactoR
- "jeffrey dahmer used a vat. that's what i prefer because it makes the meat much more tender. trust me, its hard to eat raw, rubbery chewy ass human Cook it baby!"
Posted by Kratur on "Cannibalism" by aXe FactoR
- "Wow, You captured a feeling I've had lately so well, it really hits down deep. Your writing describes the feelings behind them perfectly. I especially like this one for the advice that comes with it for me. Thanx"
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "Love U so, So I let U go" by aXe FactoR
- "Nice one. I really like just about all of this, A couple of lines I would change, but hey, everyone has preferences. I'd probably play with the metre a bit as well. :) Sentiment was awesome!"
Posted by Unknown on "I was never quite lonely before" by aXe FactoR
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