Winter this year wouldn't be that cold (for Blood of Winter)
By aXe FactoR
Like sizzling sparks ignited into dazzling fireworks
Though evanescent still leaves a feeling of warmth
Ever comforting, never discouraging
I know my stay here in DP isn't for nought.
To which days pass & seasons change
& time seem to disappear in dusky sunlight & smoke
One would never forget someone special
Who uses winter to pale the pelting sunlight,
tinting the mountain gold
Where to me, a world lit by computer screens instead of the sun doesn't
matter anymore
As it is through here where i found release from harsh lines and countless
chores
Through it all my concentration narrows down to a single thought
Which is to credit my Poet-hero for the endless smiles he has brought
& just like a conductor climaxing his piece to the crescendo
and feeling immense pride as he finishes it hearing an encore,
I lay awake with a feeling of contentment in my heart,
Knowing that winter this year wouldn't be that cold...
(Well Dan, this piece is specially written 4 u...Thanks loads 4 being one
of the lights in my life, & 4 all the nice emails we exchanged. i thought
its due time i credit u 4 ya kindness & friendship. My writing ain't great,
but i hope u'll like it all the same :) )
Comments on "Winter this year wouldn't be that cold (for Blood of Winter)"
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
awww so sweet and dedicated :) ~ss
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A former member wrote:
I like your use of adjectives here, Mel! ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
From time to time, there are a couple people I've written tributes to here on DP myself, simply because what they say moves me more than what I say. The tributes are like this but they don't rhyme. It's nice to see these. ~Shane~
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Everytime someone has written something for me here I have taken in everyword and stitched them to my heart...now I have a new patch to wear with pride from this beautiful friend of mine...
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
see, what you see here is a part of me that most don't and won't ever know...to most of my friends I am just Dan or Tebo, here I am Blood of Winter, and I am as much him as he is me...Thank You so much...
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On Monday, August 2, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
:)
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i really feel this piece* great work! again .. blood of winter's very lucky to have you as friend & so am i....*669*