Expressions

By Midnight Phoenix

Isn’t it cute
This heart on a string
For your amusement
Your plaything

Is it sincere
The love that you bring
For your enchantment
Is amazing

Cutting up
This emotional paper
Mixing feelings
So sharp

Questions arise
Hold up your hand
So confused
All dark

Early morning
Finally an aftershock
Heart explosion
Empty room

Calming storm
Say a few nice things
Wanting more
Of you

(Once again, trying a completely different approach than what I'm used to. We'll call it experiment #233243DSF)

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Published on Sunday, December 14, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Expressions"

On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, Invader Lyn (48) wrote:

When was the last time the last two lines actually applied.
On Friday, September 24, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

i like the fragmented feel of this piece. tastefully done. -MeL-
On Friday, January 2, 2004, sole (93) wrote:

Naturally poetic and I think no matter how you approach poetry it will turn out good, you just have the mind for it. Excellent work.
On Tuesday, December 16, 2003, Delilah (113) wrote:

I liked this one a lot...I feel it...and that's good...~Delilah~
On Monday, December 15, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358) wrote:

Drifted me to another land...few words are left to be said after reading this....but well done...ur experiments never seem to fail.
On Sunday, December 14, 2003, Sinnocence (49) wrote:

i cant believe i didnt see this earlier! i love your work even when you DO experiment! i like how its really choppy. but i know the pattern really well, being treated like crap, apologies and inevitable forgiveness.
A former member wrote: This is lovely, a very nice different approach. It's so good that you can variate your style and still produce such a beautiful poem. ~Wish Upon A Star