Big Bad Wolf
By aXe FactoR
Black skies, stormy weather, claps of thunder.
(Heard the main door opening)
Scampered to the corner of my room. Terrified.
(Footsteps approaching…”Tud, Tud, Tud”)
Buries my head into my knees
(Turning of my doorknob, another clap of thunder echoed)
Hide… I need to hide… crawls under the bed
(Fanatic smile, rubs hands in glee, lusty look)
Heart thumping wildly, prays he won’t find me
(Bed sheet flips open, light peered through. Saw my pathetic crouching
body. Licks lips)
Thrash about. Twist free. To no avail.
(Drags me across the floor like a rag doll, ripping clothes)
Forces himself on me
(Ignores begs of mercy)
Bites me all over. Thrusts. Pounds on me like a beast.
(Kicks… kicks… stop kicking……..)
Dirty, stained, wasted… I wana die
(Withdraws, stood up, pulls up pants, laughs insanely, leaves)
Bleeding. Bleeding again. Left my flesh ripped. Raw. Throbbing. Pulsating.
(He closes the door softly behind him.)
Weeps. Bawls. Nothing helps.
(Enters my mother’s room to accompany his wife-to-be)
Too young to understand.i'm 12.Thought he’s supposed to be my new daddy.
(He lays again with her that night.)
My favorite bedtime story gone wrong.
(I’m red riding hood. He’s Big Bad Wolf.)
Comments on "Big Bad Wolf"
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On Monday, August 16, 2010, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
Well constructed and very captivating, but also devastating. I fear this story is true. It all too often is, anyway. It filled me with anger and sorrow. I would be willing to be the one to deliver to him justice.
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A former member wrote:
I would have to agree with capt_funguy Great descripting
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A former member wrote:
this is teriffic, i love it!fantastic work...
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On Monday, May 31, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
i feel sadden, well written, but is sad
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
time to turn these pices into music BABY!*669*
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i agree.. very nice piece! *669*
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
interesting approach within an interesting approach ... structure , liberties , and setting ... wind towards a heartsmash conclusion ... great piece ... funguy